for Dying for you4/16/2004 c1 
62fren chi
wow this is great stuff. you're best of whats on this site. love is definetly the only thing worth living for and the only thing thats ever made me smile. and i've felt like hurting myself at times.
62fren chiwow this is great stuff. you're best of whats on this site. love is definetly the only thing worth living for and the only thing thats ever made me smile. and i've felt like hurting myself at times.
3/12/2004 c1 37TasteofRevenge
Hey, good poem, nice feel to it. Fix your sixth line though. I don't know if you like angsty or not, but if you do, check out 'Oh How I Regret It' by yours truely. Keep up the good work!
-TOR
37TasteofRevengeHey, good poem, nice feel to it. Fix your sixth line though. I don't know if you like angsty or not, but if you do, check out 'Oh How I Regret It' by yours truely. Keep up the good work!
-TOR
3/6/2004 c1 Milly
I think its awsome just one little thing though take out that line or fix the one that says "from going up a 9,0 mountain" and while were on the subject on the line that says "the cold breese pasting by me" you might wanna fix those two words in parentheses
I think its awsome just one little thing though take out that line or fix the one that says "from going up a 9,0 mountain" and while were on the subject on the line that says "the cold breese pasting by me" you might wanna fix those two words in parentheses