
9/4/2004 c1 downforthecount
That was beautiful. That's how I feel all the time, lonely and unloved. Very nice.
That was beautiful. That's how I feel all the time, lonely and unloved. Very nice.
5/17/2004 c1
44Nearly There
This is very good too.
Well done, it's well powerful.
And moving.
I've writen poems much like this, so check them out if you have the chance :D

This is very good too.
Well done, it's well powerful.
And moving.
I've writen poems much like this, so check them out if you have the chance :D
4/27/2004 c1
71Sang Yu Nung
A very powerful and moving piece! Wonderful, especially the first line 2nd stanza "I'd die tonight for love"- wow! I'm touched, great! I also like the line "break the glass that holds me from everything"- ^_^

A very powerful and moving piece! Wonderful, especially the first line 2nd stanza "I'd die tonight for love"- wow! I'm touched, great! I also like the line "break the glass that holds me from everything"- ^_^
4/9/2004 c1
52EnviableRegent
Wow. I love your poem. You're a very good writer. Keep it up and let me know when you have any new ones. I'd like to read them all.

Wow. I love your poem. You're a very good writer. Keep it up and let me know when you have any new ones. I'd like to read them all.
3/7/2004 c1 invalid id
Tonight of all nights I feel this. You are good, I relate 100%...just won't happen for me not anymore now. God, you're good.
Tonight of all nights I feel this. You are good, I relate 100%...just won't happen for me not anymore now. God, you're good.