for Circumscribing and Surrendering3/31/2004 c1 
73Senorita Diabla
M... It was okay. Definately well written, and done with a passion, so really I'm understating how good it was. Yay for the poem, not-so-yay for Heather's stupidity of logic... I really liked the line "You say you are a man of the strongest faith/Yet you build these fallacies to avoid trust in yourself." =) Awesome.
chochang913
73Senorita DiablaM... It was okay. Definately well written, and done with a passion, so really I'm understating how good it was. Yay for the poem, not-so-yay for Heather's stupidity of logic... I really liked the line "You say you are a man of the strongest faith/Yet you build these fallacies to avoid trust in yourself." =) Awesome.
chochang913
3/21/2004 c1 2mks-wannabe
i liked that alot! that wuz really cool. good job! keep up the good work!
-mKs
p.s.
thank u for the review on "Who You Are", it made me think...^_^
2mks-wannabei liked that alot! that wuz really cool. good job! keep up the good work!
-mKs
p.s.
thank u for the review on "Who You Are", it made me think...^_^
3/12/2004 c1 85Rowan Arkenson
Immense. Especially the ending.
I wish I had something constructive to say...meh, I'll just shower you with praise instead for such a powerful and brave poem.
(Going on favourite stories list - this really was a very well-done poem.)
-rowanx
85Rowan ArkensonImmense. Especially the ending.
I wish I had something constructive to say...meh, I'll just shower you with praise instead for such a powerful and brave poem.
(Going on favourite stories list - this really was a very well-done poem.)
-rowanx
3/7/2004 c1 8locke huntsley
this...was intense. It hit's on a few things I've been beliving myself for a while now..it's *really* nice. I'm impressed
8locke huntsleythis...was intense. It hit's on a few things I've been beliving myself for a while now..it's *really* nice. I'm impressed
3/7/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
I love it. It mirrors some of my most recent thought. So.. it struck a chord. Very well put and insightful ideas.
144Infinite SmilesI love it. It mirrors some of my most recent thought. So.. it struck a chord. Very well put and insightful ideas.