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5/31/2005 c1 8Slowly Sinking
Love the format, this is a really good poem! I especially like the 'fallen victim of my own mind' bit.

Thanks for reviewing Shattered Reflections, no-one's actually understood what I was trying to say yet so don't worry, coz that's just poetry.
5/10/2005 c1 sunday night sky
i really like the use of indentation and italics, it creates a good rhythm. the content of the poem is good too, well defined. i feel that i can understand what the feelings are behind it.
6/9/2004 c1 9Happy-Platipus
Whoa... You are an AMAZING poet!
For some reason, the site woudn't let me review 'war' or 'hate' so I will review them here.
They are both extremely well written and extremely true.
Keep up the good work!
5/12/2004 c1 Territo
great poem, nicely written.
i like it.
5/8/2004 c1 29Akaiyume
Hi, this is a really good one, I like it, especially the ending of it. It makes me feel as though everything is at ease at last.. somehow..like a content sigh after a hard struggle.. anyway.. I just like it. Good job!
(thnx for reviewing mine by the way, glad you liked it :D)
5/2/2004 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
i love your use of stanzas and your format. as well, your poem is really good.
4/8/2004 c1 64Samara-chan
"Wow." That is all I can say. This poem left me with a tranquil feeling, even though it describes utter hopelessness... great job; it's going on my favourites.
3/11/2004 c1 31Modern Poet
This was cool. I like the style you've chosen to write it in.
3/10/2004 c1 34curiouzkatt
wo... wow. =^-^= i can relate at some point...*stares what's visible of the moon* good luck.

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