for Descent5/31/2005 c1 
8Slowly Sinking
Love the format, this is a really good poem! I especially like the 'fallen victim of my own mind' bit.
Thanks for reviewing Shattered Reflections, no-one's actually understood what I was trying to say yet so don't worry, coz that's just poetry.
8Slowly SinkingLove the format, this is a really good poem! I especially like the 'fallen victim of my own mind' bit.
Thanks for reviewing Shattered Reflections, no-one's actually understood what I was trying to say yet so don't worry, coz that's just poetry.
5/10/2005 c1 sunday night sky
i really like the use of indentation and italics, it creates a good rhythm. the content of the poem is good too, well defined. i feel that i can understand what the feelings are behind it.
i really like the use of indentation and italics, it creates a good rhythm. the content of the poem is good too, well defined. i feel that i can understand what the feelings are behind it.
6/9/2004 c1 9Happy-Platipus
Whoa... You are an AMAZING poet!
For some reason, the site woudn't let me review 'war' or 'hate' so I will review them here.
They are both extremely well written and extremely true.
Keep up the good work!
9Happy-PlatipusWhoa... You are an AMAZING poet!
For some reason, the site woudn't let me review 'war' or 'hate' so I will review them here.
They are both extremely well written and extremely true.
Keep up the good work!
5/8/2004 c1 29Akaiyume
Hi, this is a really good one, I like it, especially the ending of it. It makes me feel as though everything is at ease at last.. somehow..like a content sigh after a hard struggle.. anyway.. I just like it. Good job!
(thnx for reviewing mine by the way, glad you liked it :D)
29AkaiyumeHi, this is a really good one, I like it, especially the ending of it. It makes me feel as though everything is at ease at last.. somehow..like a content sigh after a hard struggle.. anyway.. I just like it. Good job!
(thnx for reviewing mine by the way, glad you liked it :D)
5/2/2004 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
i love your use of stanzas and your format. as well, your poem is really good.
3Cry Tears of Darknessi love your use of stanzas and your format. as well, your poem is really good.
4/8/2004 c1 64Samara-chan
"Wow." That is all I can say. This poem left me with a tranquil feeling, even though it describes utter hopelessness... great job; it's going on my favourites.
64Samara-chan"Wow." That is all I can say. This poem left me with a tranquil feeling, even though it describes utter hopelessness... great job; it's going on my favourites.
3/10/2004 c1 34curiouzkatt
wo... wow. =^-^= i can relate at some point...*stares what's visible of the moon* good luck.
34curiouzkattwo... wow. =^-^= i can relate at some point...*stares what's visible of the moon* good luck.