for Heartstrings Attached6/26/2005 c1 
74laughter at the funeral
your imageries and thoughts just appear out of nowhere and i love that...very very good job...oh and pls, if you have the time, pls do review some of my poems...thanks...
truly yours...
74laughter at the funeralyour imageries and thoughts just appear out of nowhere and i love that...very very good job...oh and pls, if you have the time, pls do review some of my poems...thanks...
truly yours...
9/4/2004 c1 15heartbreak hotel
YOUR THOUGHTS ROCKET FROM ONE THING TO ANOTHER SO FAST AND SO WELL THAT YOU MAKE BEAUTIFUL ANALOGIES IN YOUR POEMS. I STILL HATE YOU BY THE WAY. I CAN'T BELIEVE I DIDNT' REVIEW THIS POEM SINCE IT WAS LIKE. JOANNE INSPIRED. I'M TAKING A BREAK FROM READING MY 832 PAGE VOGUE.
15heartbreak hotelYOUR THOUGHTS ROCKET FROM ONE THING TO ANOTHER SO FAST AND SO WELL THAT YOU MAKE BEAUTIFUL ANALOGIES IN YOUR POEMS. I STILL HATE YOU BY THE WAY. I CAN'T BELIEVE I DIDNT' REVIEW THIS POEM SINCE IT WAS LIKE. JOANNE INSPIRED. I'M TAKING A BREAK FROM READING MY 832 PAGE VOGUE.
6/10/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
Finally.. some good talent on here. I hope you'll post some more of your work often. I like the hints and ideas in the first stanza the most, gets the poem going. Sounds like some sort of "twisted" love poem and it contrasts with love I suppose. That's what I can decipher out of this wonderful piece.
Jenna xx
119AntiPleasureFinally.. some good talent on here. I hope you'll post some more of your work often. I like the hints and ideas in the first stanza the most, gets the poem going. Sounds like some sort of "twisted" love poem and it contrasts with love I suppose. That's what I can decipher out of this wonderful piece.
Jenna xx
3/8/2004 c1 J-O-J-O
LALALA. *Cuts it out*
...'Em strings, I mean. Always getting in the way.
LALALA. *Cuts it out*
...'Em strings, I mean. Always getting in the way.