for Hopelessly2/24 c1 rachelstudio
Hello
I admire your storytelling abilities, and I believe they would be a perfect fit for a comic collaboration. Please feel free to reach out to me email at rachelstudio156 at gmail dot com or on Discord at rachelstudio.
Hello
I admire your storytelling abilities, and I believe they would be a perfect fit for a comic collaboration. Please feel free to reach out to me email at rachelstudio156 at gmail dot com or on Discord at rachelstudio.
5/9/2008 c1 sunflower.kiss
aw (:
Usually I would say: continue, but erm, this seems like a good ending. Cliffhangers are always good things to leave a one-shot at, because people review about that too.
aw (:
Usually I would say: continue, but erm, this seems like a good ending. Cliffhangers are always good things to leave a one-shot at, because people review about that too.
11/3/2005 c1 Kjersti
That was so sad... And very beautiful. I loved it.
That was so sad... And very beautiful. I loved it.
11/24/2004 c1 Kathryn
Kathryn's my name! How exciting. :D This was really well done. (But maybe I just loved it because I so rarely see my name actually spelt like that unless I'm writing it.)
Kathryn's my name! How exciting. :D This was really well done. (But maybe I just loved it because I so rarely see my name actually spelt like that unless I'm writing it.)
11/22/2004 c1 
4lost-pfreak23
r u making more than one chapter? cuz its really good! i can't wait to read more!
4lost-pfreak23r u making more than one chapter? cuz its really good! i can't wait to read more!
3/16/2004 c1 4anatidaephobiac
Brandon seems like a great guy (apart from the eavesdropping thing)... this story is really good... are you going to continue it?
4anatidaephobiacBrandon seems like a great guy (apart from the eavesdropping thing)... this story is really good... are you going to continue it?
3/15/2004 c1 1kelseypaige
Oh, it's so bittersweet. I dont really like Kathryn though.. she doesnt seem good enough for Brandon. He's so frikin sweet! Omg, I knew a man likethat.. :whistful sigh: Well, i hope it gets happier soon! Cant wait for an update on this, and For the sake of. UPDATE soon!
~Fallen FAntasist
1kelseypaigeOh, it's so bittersweet. I dont really like Kathryn though.. she doesnt seem good enough for Brandon. He's so frikin sweet! Omg, I knew a man likethat.. :whistful sigh: Well, i hope it gets happier soon! Cant wait for an update on this, and For the sake of. UPDATE soon!
~Fallen FAntasist
3/10/2004 c1 8poohba
I don't usually read modern day stories, but when I saw that Knightengale had written this one... well, I decided to give it a shot.
I'm glad I did. This is just as good as your Regencies are. You understand human emotion so well that I forget half the time that your bio says you're still in high school. You write like you have at least ten years more world experience than that.
Anyway, I don't know if you plan to do more with this story or not. It works fine as a one-shot, but I could see where you could go on with it too.
Sorry about the writer's block. It happens to everyone - and somehow strikes worse while writing sequels. (At least that was my experience with it.) I'm glad to hear you're not giving up on "Propriety," though. You've got a good thing going there.
Anyway, this review feels like it's growing as long as the story was, so I will just end it by saying, once again, good job.
8poohbaI don't usually read modern day stories, but when I saw that Knightengale had written this one... well, I decided to give it a shot.
I'm glad I did. This is just as good as your Regencies are. You understand human emotion so well that I forget half the time that your bio says you're still in high school. You write like you have at least ten years more world experience than that.
Anyway, I don't know if you plan to do more with this story or not. It works fine as a one-shot, but I could see where you could go on with it too.
Sorry about the writer's block. It happens to everyone - and somehow strikes worse while writing sequels. (At least that was my experience with it.) I'm glad to hear you're not giving up on "Propriety," though. You've got a good thing going there.
Anyway, this review feels like it's growing as long as the story was, so I will just end it by saying, once again, good job.
3/9/2004 c1 7ONEthousandWORDs
This makes me feel awful... I've been in a situation slightly like that, only I was the initiator of the breakup... It was terrible... I'm still not better from it. You should continue this, and maybe resolve it, too... please?
It might help me a bit... please?
7ONEthousandWORDsThis makes me feel awful... I've been in a situation slightly like that, only I was the initiator of the breakup... It was terrible... I'm still not better from it. You should continue this, and maybe resolve it, too... please?
It might help me a bit... please?