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8/17/2009 c1 presenting-Mae
makes me think of Lolita (by vladimir Nabokov). in which a love for another person turns into an obsession. -mae
4/19/2004 c1 54Werecat99
I liked that. There was a sad feeling in it that caught me in the tale. The repetition of the "star" and "hai" concepts added a lot to the atmosphere.
Good work.
3/15/2004 c1 34Iris Devine
It was about a bald guy who appreciates his exgirlfriend.
I liked it. I like how it implied that God tastes like urine. And the piece of hair in the glass. It was flawless.
3/9/2004 c1 28Rionarayne
...Where to begin? You've certainly taken a different approach to a peice of fiction. Or reality, because it really sounds like it could be either. The feelings of loss and inspiration and lonliness were very nicely weaved in between the words; they perfectly illustrated the narrator's thoughts. There's a lot to be learned from things like these.
Nice job.
Rionarayne

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