for Honor Duel9/20/2005 c1 
40T41N7
wow, that was incredible. I love writing duels, but I have never read something so epic in my life! You certainly have done your share of research concerning swordfighting. However, I never imagined Genghis using a sword, he is normally depicted with a club or barbaric bludeoning weapon, and his style was probably barbaric as well. Honestly, the fighters could have been replaced with any two heroes though. It was very well written, and those soldiers that went to go get drinks sure didn't know what real entertainment was (or maybe I don't).
40T41N7wow, that was incredible. I love writing duels, but I have never read something so epic in my life! You certainly have done your share of research concerning swordfighting. However, I never imagined Genghis using a sword, he is normally depicted with a club or barbaric bludeoning weapon, and his style was probably barbaric as well. Honestly, the fighters could have been replaced with any two heroes though. It was very well written, and those soldiers that went to go get drinks sure didn't know what real entertainment was (or maybe I don't).
7/13/2004 c1 11Fabian Beswick
Actually, I think Theodoric was around in about 500-600 AD, maybe late 400s, but anyway this is a good one.
Darn, why'd those Mongols win? Der Goths are much better!
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11Fabian BeswickActually, I think Theodoric was around in about 500-600 AD, maybe late 400s, but anyway this is a good one.
Darn, why'd those Mongols win? Der Goths are much better!
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6/1/2004 c1 4Blindfire40
Good job. You had nice description of every aspect, and there really was nothing to complain about in this story. the one thing that is kind of confusing is who Ghengis Khan managed to puncture a metal breastplate with a single thrust of his scimitar. Other than that detail, however, this is a superb short work.
4Blindfire40Good job. You had nice description of every aspect, and there really was nothing to complain about in this story. the one thing that is kind of confusing is who Ghengis Khan managed to puncture a metal breastplate with a single thrust of his scimitar. Other than that detail, however, this is a superb short work.
3/16/2004 c1 The Dark Wizard
This was very well written, im oh so proud.
This was very well written, im oh so proud.
3/10/2004 c1 3Cederick Kuneraze
Extremely good description! Better than the first fight scene in by story!
3Cederick KunerazeExtremely good description! Better than the first fight scene in by story!