for Unpredictable4/12/2004 c1 
26girl-23
Good, I could sense your emotions through this poem. You were mad. LOL. It's good though. Check out my stuff if you have time, thanks. Keep writing.
Laura
26girl-23Good, I could sense your emotions through this poem. You were mad. LOL. It's good though. Check out my stuff if you have time, thanks. Keep writing.
Laura
3/28/2004 c1 7TigHan
i love it. YOU'RE WRONG! lol, YS joke. which teacher did you write this about? i'm not gonna make this a long review cuz i'm gonna go review all your other stuff too! thanks for putting me on your page!
7TigHani love it. YOU'RE WRONG! lol, YS joke. which teacher did you write this about? i'm not gonna make this a long review cuz i'm gonna go review all your other stuff too! thanks for putting me on your page!
3/25/2004 c1 Tatsu-Dreamer
It sounds like a ranting speech more than a poem, but it still is very good.
It sounds like a ranting speech more than a poem, but it still is very good.
3/24/2004 c1 19Alasse Tiwele
this is a good poem, i can feel the frustration that you felt when your teacher made that comment. Very good
~Happy Writing
Alasse
19Alasse Tiwelethis is a good poem, i can feel the frustration that you felt when your teacher made that comment. Very good
~Happy Writing
Alasse