
9/3/2005 c1 jenny
please add more to this story. its starting out really good.
please add more to this story. its starting out really good.
5/2/2005 c1
13Tenshistar
Oh please write more. It sounds really good. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please!

Oh please write more. It sounds really good. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please!
8/20/2004 c1
17Lady of romance world88
How dare Grey do that to Shelley? Poor Adam, when he discovered about Grey. I can't believe Grey look alike his father. So Shelley liked him? I wonder what happened if he returned? Hurry update soon. I can't wait to heard more in next chapter.

How dare Grey do that to Shelley? Poor Adam, when he discovered about Grey. I can't believe Grey look alike his father. So Shelley liked him? I wonder what happened if he returned? Hurry update soon. I can't wait to heard more in next chapter.
5/20/2004 c1 Coco
allo!this is great!but i must say that you've really built up the tension at the end of the chapter!write more soon!:) later!
allo!this is great!but i must say that you've really built up the tension at the end of the chapter!write more soon!:) later!
5/13/2004 c1
27Kasatriya
This story is good, although it needs to be betad...no offense, but it was a little rushed. It is a wonderful idfea though, PLEASE UPDATE

This story is good, although it needs to be betad...no offense, but it was a little rushed. It is a wonderful idfea though, PLEASE UPDATE