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12/16/2004 c1 In natura
The last line just kicks you in the stomach. The style is really good because it shoots up the pace."Likte det diktet her jeg"
5/31/2004 c1 9Aerak3024
That was confusing.. Cool, though. Good job.
3/12/2004 c1 15AlleyKatGV
Very...well written, very touching and emotional. Very good!
3/12/2004 c1 58Kalyra Shadowdancer
i love this poem. the emotions come through so clearly and painfully. it's beautiful in a sad way. The style and word choice also adds to the effect. nice.
~KS

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