for Portrait of a Whore4/1/2004 c2 
137Ria Mala
Wow, this is a really interesting story. It's not just a sex piece, it seems like there's something much more deep developing. I'll be interested in reading more.
137Ria MalaWow, this is a really interesting story. It's not just a sex piece, it seems like there's something much more deep developing. I'll be interested in reading more.
3/14/2004 c2 5Ticcies
Wow, very good! I like this much. I was a little shocked at first at her age, but then I remembered that I, too, have a young prostitute character, and it's quite true to life. This Jack character is quite mysterious. I like that you've held his air of mystery for these chapters. I'm very interested in where this is going!
5TicciesWow, very good! I like this much. I was a little shocked at first at her age, but then I remembered that I, too, have a young prostitute character, and it's quite true to life. This Jack character is quite mysterious. I like that you've held his air of mystery for these chapters. I'm very interested in where this is going!
3/14/2004 c2 Jade the Fairyness
Aww...what a cute little story! I really like it, because of the artist thing. What a gentleman, gave her his jacket. Keep updating, this is a great story!
Aww...what a cute little story! I really like it, because of the artist thing. What a gentleman, gave her his jacket. Keep updating, this is a great story!
3/12/2004 c1 shimmy
jack is a painter that wants to paint her naked? does she have a giant blue diamond necklave too? haha, sorry . just kidding, the only thing that the guy named jack wanting to paint her. you are quite a talented writer and i hope that you keep it up
jack is a painter that wants to paint her naked? does she have a giant blue diamond necklave too? haha, sorry . just kidding, the only thing that the guy named jack wanting to paint her. you are quite a talented writer and i hope that you keep it up