
5/24/2004 c1
58floorcollision
i love this poem- and most of your other pieces too!
off to continue r&r-ing!:)

i love this poem- and most of your other pieces too!
off to continue r&r-ing!:)
4/10/2004 c1
5redrussianscorpion
"He asks me if coral is a color,
And I tell him to imagine love at sixteen"
Yes, haven't we all?
this lie I feel exzemplifies this bit, your exploration of a more shy, quiet, uncomprimised love of types is nice, and thankfully, not too "poetic".

"He asks me if coral is a color,
And I tell him to imagine love at sixteen"
Yes, haven't we all?
this lie I feel exzemplifies this bit, your exploration of a more shy, quiet, uncomprimised love of types is nice, and thankfully, not too "poetic".
3/19/2004 c1 Diana
I can't remember if you posted this at dA but I love it regardless.
If I could be bothered to sign in, I would add to my faves. I will have to do it later! :)
I can't remember if you posted this at dA but I love it regardless.
If I could be bothered to sign in, I would add to my faves. I will have to do it later! :)
3/13/2004 c1 vers le sud
Beautiful narration. Reminds me of e.e. cummings, yet evokes emotion more effectively. Truly talented! Keep up the brilliant work.
Beautiful narration. Reminds me of e.e. cummings, yet evokes emotion more effectively. Truly talented! Keep up the brilliant work.
3/13/2004 c1 Kez
*sniffles* so sad, -teasing-. I loved verse 5: "He asks me if coral is a color,
And I tell him to imagine love at sixteen," and also the constant reminders of the gray ocean, and no (perhaps rising?) sun.
-Kez
*sniffles* so sad, -teasing-. I loved verse 5: "He asks me if coral is a color,
And I tell him to imagine love at sixteen," and also the constant reminders of the gray ocean, and no (perhaps rising?) sun.
-Kez