for Colors8/5/2004 c1 
20wee-rebz
this is very good, though the last line was quite harsh...i thought the way u used the colours was great, and the way it began 'I dreamed'...it was one of those flashing dream sequences...great!
20wee-rebzthis is very good, though the last line was quite harsh...i thought the way u used the colours was great, and the way it began 'I dreamed'...it was one of those flashing dream sequences...great!
6/21/2004 c1 14Olliegami
XD. Sweet.
I'm not gonna go ahead and review on EVERYTHING.
So I'll just say here. i love your style, all round
14OlliegamiXD. Sweet.
I'm not gonna go ahead and review on EVERYTHING.
So I'll just say here. i love your style, all round
3/18/2004 c1 117Seras Nova
Whoa...different way to express colors. I like it though. Last line was a little too...erm...rough? Yea, rough for the rest of it. I like the fact that you said to hell with whoever said pink was a Valentine's Day color. Nice.
Keep writing.
-Seras
117Seras NovaWhoa...different way to express colors. I like it though. Last line was a little too...erm...rough? Yea, rough for the rest of it. I like the fact that you said to hell with whoever said pink was a Valentine's Day color. Nice.
Keep writing.
-Seras