4/22/2004 c1 Adrienne of the Dark Realms
I love this so much...I can just feel the anxiety and pain...Good job!

3/15/2004 c1 Libby Ann
Lord...your poems are awesome. I loved the feeling that came with this...it was truly superb. I also like the change of the tone of voice with each stanza...the first one was slightly panicky; the second is a slightly more relieved tone, and the last two stanzas were simply mystical. Also...when one is reading aloud this poem, they notice that the speed required to read the rhymes changes with the tone of voice, if you know what I'm talking about. This is simply awesome. I really wish I could write poetry like you do.

3/13/2004 c1 37Peachez 24
Very nicely written. Your rhymes and words make the poem flow and easy to read. It's easier to concentrate on the context. Great job, keep writing!
Peachez ^_~