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7/12/2004 c1 40singingspeechless
omg! this is exactly what my best friend is going through...except she hasn't killed herself..yet. maybe if she read this, she could understand more of her feelings and come back to reality...
3/28/2004 c1 7TigHan
i remember when you sent this to me last year... it's so amazing. lauren, i hope you aren't feeling this and just somehow wrote it down, cuz if you DO feel this, TALK TO ME! ok, i'm glad i got that out of my system.
3/25/2004 c1 dreamingofflyingaway
HELO! *somersaults* good heavens woman, this is one depressing poem! ha! I remember when you wrote this! teehee! although, I can't really figure out he reason as to why I'm giddy...maybe it's due to sleep deprivation...
because today wasn't a good day.
anyway, I better be off, ciao hun! thx for reviewing my story! (4 reviews i have!)
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
3/24/2004 c1 19Alasse Tiwele
this is really powerful and so depressing, i suppose that that was the point wasn't it? when i read your description i though "oh good, a happy ending" but boy was i wrong this is very good please continue writing
Happy Writing
~Alasse
3/13/2004 c1 13sunscraped
This is really good! I wish I could write like that.
-LXS
3/13/2004 c1 8Sable Riddle
I've always loved angsty poems...and this one is no exception. I could actually feel the anxiety of the narrator...this is really good. I've just uploaded a poem too. It's called Relief. I intended for it to be angsty, but it didn't turn out too good. Please come read and review. ~ES

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