for The Psychiatrist5/11/2005 c1 
62lifescrewsusall
These many-tiered insanities, more complex than a cake- all fabricated for my own sick amusement?I simply do not understand.Oh doctor, isn't this what you wanted? Isn't this what you want?
I love the ending! whole poem is very fluid...and yes, dark humor. :)
62lifescrewsusallThese many-tiered insanities, more complex than a cake- all fabricated for my own sick amusement?I simply do not understand.Oh doctor, isn't this what you wanted? Isn't this what you want?
I love the ending! whole poem is very fluid...and yes, dark humor. :)
5/22/2004 c1 Jennacharm
Nice. Like the format. Like the dark humor. Like the stuff in brackets.
The end didn't do it for me. The rest was good... but the end was a little disappointing.
The 'always manage to jump in front of an ambulance' is really amusing.
- Jennacharm
Nice. Like the format. Like the dark humor. Like the stuff in brackets.
The end didn't do it for me. The rest was good... but the end was a little disappointing.
The 'always manage to jump in front of an ambulance' is really amusing.
- Jennacharm
3/31/2004 c1 3AyamariAnn
Interesting. I liked the POV. It added an extra something. Very nicely done!
3AyamariAnnInteresting. I liked the POV. It added an extra something. Very nicely done!
3/22/2004 c1 28frugale
Damn, that was as good as hell! You are so mis-... under-... , well, not read and reviewed and appreciated enough!
28frugaleDamn, that was as good as hell! You are so mis-... under-... , well, not read and reviewed and appreciated enough!
3/17/2004 c1 12tangible mandible
LOL! Ah, psycho patients are so fun to write about. Another good disorder to add to her list would be paranoia.
12tangible mandibleLOL! Ah, psycho patients are so fun to write about. Another good disorder to add to her list would be paranoia.