
3/28/2004 c1
7TigHan
whoa! that was so deep! holy... why can't i write poetry like that? and it's so deep too. hm... GRR! you are so good. wow. i can't get over how much i like this poem, lol.

whoa! that was so deep! holy... why can't i write poetry like that? and it's so deep too. hm... GRR! you are so good. wow. i can't get over how much i like this poem, lol.
3/25/2004 c1 Tatsu-Dreamer
wow. Your stuff is great. I like this poem a lot. It makes you feel like it would be to have that much guilt and loss of control. It makes you feel alienated and destroyed. Wow.
wow. Your stuff is great. I like this poem a lot. It makes you feel like it would be to have that much guilt and loss of control. It makes you feel alienated and destroyed. Wow.
3/24/2004 c1
19Alasse Tiwele
wow...this is powerful and although i can't relate to it (I'm 13) i can really feel it. good job
Happy Writing
~Alasse

wow...this is powerful and although i can't relate to it (I'm 13) i can really feel it. good job
Happy Writing
~Alasse
3/20/2004 c1
1tarienelle
ooh. dark. i like. lol.. i write alot of "dark" poems too. its really great, i like it. ^^ keep it up! =)

ooh. dark. i like. lol.. i write alot of "dark" poems too. its really great, i like it. ^^ keep it up! =)
3/17/2004 c1
2Sheila Ibre
Is this about drinking?
I don't drink but now you've assured me that I should never.
Vivid.

Is this about drinking?
I don't drink but now you've assured me that I should never.
Vivid.