for The Way Down7/6/2004 c1 
88breakme
For ttrying to describe what seems like an almost indescribable feeling you did a really good job. I like the last part where it repeats the line
'intoxicated, through droopy eyelids.'
Very very good
88breakmeFor ttrying to describe what seems like an almost indescribable feeling you did a really good job. I like the last part where it repeats the line
'intoxicated, through droopy eyelids.'
Very very good
3/15/2004 c1 1Okami Hikage
I really love your writing style, and this story is no exception. It brings you into the story, and makes you block out everything around you. I admire how much dedication, thought and emotion you put into your writing. It always makes me want to read more of your work. :D
1Okami HikageI really love your writing style, and this story is no exception. It brings you into the story, and makes you block out everything around you. I admire how much dedication, thought and emotion you put into your writing. It always makes me want to read more of your work. :D
3/14/2004 c1 30Roadside Dryer
Um, interesting. If there is more i would love to read, of course. Good job, i have had that feeling before, and i did want to die, so badly.
30Roadside DryerUm, interesting. If there is more i would love to read, of course. Good job, i have had that feeling before, and i did want to die, so badly.
3/14/2004 c1 8Raven Oghma
Very nice work. I do enjoy the subtle nature of your writing. I'll be back to read more later, I'm sure!
-Raven Oghma
8Raven OghmaVery nice work. I do enjoy the subtle nature of your writing. I'll be back to read more later, I'm sure!
-Raven Oghma
3/14/2004 c1 7neunundneunzig
I'm connecting with something that I don't think is related to the story, but if it is, you've done a very good job of doing it indirectly!
The rest of it is well-written, even if you can't comprehend it.
7neunundneunzigI'm connecting with something that I don't think is related to the story, but if it is, you've done a very good job of doing it indirectly!
The rest of it is well-written, even if you can't comprehend it.
3/14/2004 c1 Carolina.Scribe
Wow. This is a deep piece, that it is. For a few split second there I felt what this character was feeling, or at least...I think I did.
This piece speaks to me in that I've had moments where I felt very similar if not the same as this character was feeling.
Great job. The summary caught me...hook, line and sinker. ^_^ I'm really impressed by your writing style.
Wow. This is a deep piece, that it is. For a few split second there I felt what this character was feeling, or at least...I think I did.
This piece speaks to me in that I've had moments where I felt very similar if not the same as this character was feeling.
Great job. The summary caught me...hook, line and sinker. ^_^ I'm really impressed by your writing style.