2/7/2009 c1 Zwidon
I ache and I shake all night and all day was my favorite line because it had whatever you call it some literay term i cant remeber... so yeah it was good
I ache and I shake all night and all day was my favorite line because it had whatever you call it some literay term i cant remeber... so yeah it was good
3/15/2004 c1 Gypsy Pen
I like it cut off there. this is my fav. so far of what i've read from you. It would make a really good song also, it has a steady beat in the words.
Keep it up!
I like it cut off there. this is my fav. so far of what i've read from you. It would make a really good song also, it has a steady beat in the words.
Keep it up!