Reviews: Waiting | FictionPress

2/7/2009 c1 Zwidon
woah, this is really good.

3/15/2004 c1 Gypsy Pen
aw...
It's sometimes hard to believe we spend all of our life fighting to live, when we're just waiting to die

3/14/2004 c1

41Ecrire
This could be really great if you added more. Extend it, add to it, make it longer. It has the potential to be incredible.