2/7/2009 c1 Zwidon
the second stanza reminds me of edgar alan poe "The rain fell; and falling it was rain, and having fallen it was blood." I forget what story it was from.

It was really good and all metaphorical... hm yep...

3/15/2004 c1 Gypsy Pen
I like it... i'll keep an eye out for more from you.