for As the Rain Falls5/24/2004 c1 PC
YAY, VAMPS!
YAY, VAMPS!
3/27/2004 c1 
32Crazy Chick Mia
'I was made to end you days'
I think it's meant to be 'your'. Only spelling error i picked up.
Also: I LOVE IT.
omg, what powerful words. I love how the rain...is just...there. Now, i have a couple of vampires poems, but would never have thought to do anything like this. It really makes it stand out - i saw the title, and read the summary. it seemed strange, what had rain to do with a vampire? So, I read it to find out...and wasn't disapointed. I love the last verse, and the last line especially. Really good wording, very powerful. You've certainly picked the right words for the poem, and I gotta give you a big cheers =)
32Crazy Chick Mia'I was made to end you days'
I think it's meant to be 'your'. Only spelling error i picked up.
Also: I LOVE IT.
omg, what powerful words. I love how the rain...is just...there. Now, i have a couple of vampires poems, but would never have thought to do anything like this. It really makes it stand out - i saw the title, and read the summary. it seemed strange, what had rain to do with a vampire? So, I read it to find out...and wasn't disapointed. I love the last verse, and the last line especially. Really good wording, very powerful. You've certainly picked the right words for the poem, and I gotta give you a big cheers =)
3/17/2004 c1 PC
u were right that was an AWESOME (TIMES INFINITY TO THE INFINITIETH POWER) poem
u were right that was an AWESOME (TIMES INFINITY TO THE INFINITIETH POWER) poem