for Neglected Hope7/24/2004 c1 Marianne
This is literally the best poem I've ever read.
This is literally the best poem I've ever read.
5/28/2004 c1 Aimee
Hey there! I love this poem...it's really good...excellent job. I liked the sullen tones, the rhyming, the vivid imagery, and everything else! Once again, good job.
Hey there! I love this poem...it's really good...excellent job. I liked the sullen tones, the rhyming, the vivid imagery, and everything else! Once again, good job.
5/26/2004 c1 Forever Lost
Oh Lord, this is the best poem I've ever read...
I especially loved these lines, "Through the cell of secluded loneliness, Only despair could ever reign here"
Good job.
Oh Lord, this is the best poem I've ever read...
I especially loved these lines, "Through the cell of secluded loneliness, Only despair could ever reign here"
Good job.
5/19/2004 c1 Mary
I think this poem is the best I've ever read...it's so good, and I love the imagery and metaphors. Excellent job.
I think this poem is the best I've ever read...it's so good, and I love the imagery and metaphors. Excellent job.
4/29/2004 c1 transparent fire
i really like this. i could relate to it
i really like this. i could relate to it
4/22/2004 c1 Jani
This is awesome! I love it...
This is awesome! I love it...
4/6/2004 c1 Guinevere
I love this poem! It was so beautifully written; good job!
I love this poem! It was so beautifully written; good job!
3/24/2004 c1 Libby Ann
This is absolutely awesome, as is all the rest of your poems. I'm a rather dark type of person, so I enjoy this. I really love the Classic Angst genre, not the teen angst that has started in the past few years. I'm sure you read Edgar Allan Poe; his poems aren't disturbing at all, and they don't seem like horror, but they have that sort of eeriness that leaves you fascinated, and this is one of those poems. Awesome job.
This is absolutely awesome, as is all the rest of your poems. I'm a rather dark type of person, so I enjoy this. I really love the Classic Angst genre, not the teen angst that has started in the past few years. I'm sure you read Edgar Allan Poe; his poems aren't disturbing at all, and they don't seem like horror, but they have that sort of eeriness that leaves you fascinated, and this is one of those poems. Awesome job.
3/17/2004 c1 Peachez 24
Very nice poem. The idea is quite strange, almost as if they're waiting for something or someone even thought they could have happiness. Interesting. Your words and flow is great. Keep writing!
Peachez ^_~
Very nice poem. The idea is quite strange, almost as if they're waiting for something or someone even thought they could have happiness. Interesting. Your words and flow is great. Keep writing!
Peachez ^_~
3/16/2004 c1 
107Lover-of-Heartbreak
I liked it, but why give up sunlight for darkness?...don't get me wrong I practically live in the dark, but I wouldn't want to turn into a mole with no friends and no one besides INTERNET!
OH yeah: Amelia Atwater-Rhodes rocks! Especially her first book...Forests in the night or something like that(I haven't read it in forever).
107Lover-of-HeartbreakI liked it, but why give up sunlight for darkness?...don't get me wrong I practically live in the dark, but I wouldn't want to turn into a mole with no friends and no one besides INTERNET!
OH yeah: Amelia Atwater-Rhodes rocks! Especially her first book...Forests in the night or something like that(I haven't read it in forever).
3/16/2004 c1 theworldisround
This poem is excellent! Great Job!
I read this to my little brother as a random poem to show him how fictionpress works and I just became so engaged in this! Keep writing!
This poem is excellent! Great Job!
I read this to my little brother as a random poem to show him how fictionpress works and I just became so engaged in this! Keep writing!