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7/17/2005 c1 dancingking504
Wow. That was really good. I really like it how you conveyed your emotions about the world into your love for you mother. Keep up the great work

-Almost Perfect, Dancingking5004
6/19/2004 c1 9EmeraldEyes89
Aww! that was a really sweet poem. I liked the ending too! keep up the great work
~Amanda~
4/1/2004 c1 MOM
A tear drips from my check as I'm reading this poem.I read the last line and say out loud "Oh my God,he's talking about me." You have touched my heart,my soul like no other.I'm so very proud to be your mother.Yes,the fenix belongs to me.I love you with all I have and that's forever. Your,MOM
3/24/2004 c1 52Will Klemm
fascinating poem as usual. The hook at the end really added to the work.
Oh and hey, i sent all my poems to get published. Pray they publish it!

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