for Tenshi Gakuen7/28/2004 c7 
1naraolla
wah... this is great! i luv it luv it luv it! though i still had to read da previous chap to recall wat had happened. so, update, at least, sooner next time! good luck~
1naraollawah... this is great! i luv it luv it luv it! though i still had to read da previous chap to recall wat had happened. so, update, at least, sooner next time! good luck~
6/25/2004 c6 naraolla
So you'd finally updated... this is REALLY nice, truly, but try to update sooner, k? Because if you have late updates, i might forget some of the contents in the previous chaps and have to reread it again... So, update sooner then, good luck! Luv it!
So you'd finally updated... this is REALLY nice, truly, but try to update sooner, k? Because if you have late updates, i might forget some of the contents in the previous chaps and have to reread it again... So, update sooner then, good luck! Luv it!
5/11/2004 c5 2Chiideki
Heh, green hair is amusing. Kouji and aru just might become really good pals. I can see it now.
Kouji does have it hard. I like to write about people overshadowed b others, and i can just imagine how he feels when girls give him gifts TO take back to his brother.
Kinda stinks to be him, but yeah...
Update soon, lol.
2ChiidekiHeh, green hair is amusing. Kouji and aru just might become really good pals. I can see it now.
Kouji does have it hard. I like to write about people overshadowed b others, and i can just imagine how he feels when girls give him gifts TO take back to his brother.
Kinda stinks to be him, but yeah...
Update soon, lol.
5/11/2004 c4 Chiideki
Nice to see someone doesn't portray cafetaria food as totally worthless styrofoam drowned in melted plastic. Not that i do, by the way. ^_^
Okay, I tihnk the school that you are shooting for is high-class, for the gifted, rich, y'know. Yeah, you said it yourself. It's not really easy doing an environment like that, coz most kids that are in a school like that sometimes aren't so, well, nice and all.
Don't get me wrong. I dont stereotype rich kids as snobs, but you just might want to watch out a bit for overfriendliness or stuff like that. You probably characterized your characters (sounds weird) earlier, and i probably missed some stuff, yeah, i guess.
Well, good luck with finding some ideas. (wish i could post my fic, just happens i'm too lazy. Wrote the second chapter, haven't done the first. What kinda life is that...)
Nice job.
Nice to see someone doesn't portray cafetaria food as totally worthless styrofoam drowned in melted plastic. Not that i do, by the way. ^_^
Okay, I tihnk the school that you are shooting for is high-class, for the gifted, rich, y'know. Yeah, you said it yourself. It's not really easy doing an environment like that, coz most kids that are in a school like that sometimes aren't so, well, nice and all.
Don't get me wrong. I dont stereotype rich kids as snobs, but you just might want to watch out a bit for overfriendliness or stuff like that. You probably characterized your characters (sounds weird) earlier, and i probably missed some stuff, yeah, i guess.
Well, good luck with finding some ideas. (wish i could post my fic, just happens i'm too lazy. Wrote the second chapter, haven't done the first. What kinda life is that...)
Nice job.
5/11/2004 c3 Chiideki
Another well-written one. I do have one question though. When you said that Tenshi were gfted with demon powers, but looked like a human, how do Demons look like? You probably wrote it earlier, but i probably missed it, being rather oblivious and all.
Another well-written one. I do have one question though. When you said that Tenshi were gfted with demon powers, but looked like a human, how do Demons look like? You probably wrote it earlier, but i probably missed it, being rather oblivious and all.
5/11/2004 c2 Chiideki
A very thorough and detailed origin of the world now. I like the way you do not just dump a reader into the thick of action and leave them clueless. but, maybe some translations might be vital for those of us who can't really understand Japanese (i got baka...nothing else. Darn. Used to take Jap classes but had to stop, so i can only understand so little...)
Anyway, i look forwards to raeding more.
A very thorough and detailed origin of the world now. I like the way you do not just dump a reader into the thick of action and leave them clueless. but, maybe some translations might be vital for those of us who can't really understand Japanese (i got baka...nothing else. Darn. Used to take Jap classes but had to stop, so i can only understand so little...)
Anyway, i look forwards to raeding more.
5/11/2004 c1 Chiideki
I can see that you really thought this story out. your character analysis is rather confusing on my first read, but I can see that your name generation (again one of my favourite things) has deep symbolism behind some of them, and also that your socio-political system is rather well thought out. Kudos on that, and good job.
I can see that you really thought this story out. your character analysis is rather confusing on my first read, but I can see that your name generation (again one of my favourite things) has deep symbolism behind some of them, and also that your socio-political system is rather well thought out. Kudos on that, and good job.
5/11/2004 c5 1naraolla
Uwahh! You definitely MUST update soon, i luv it i luv it i luv! I can't stand da suspense! Update SOON!
1naraollaUwahh! You definitely MUST update soon, i luv it i luv it i luv! I can't stand da suspense! Update SOON!
4/13/2004 c4 naraolla
Wah...this is so nice... this isn't at all boring. If possible, please update soon! Sorry that I've simply no ideas at the present moment...sorry! I'll try to think of suggestions...
Maybe you can play around with those spiritual stuffs or...um, maybe school festivals? Well, that's kinda ordinary but at least it could get you going for a few more chaps and maybe...you could think up the rest of the chaps while writing those?
Good luck and hope this could continue smoothly! Or maybe you could write more about each character's lifestyle/personality and etc... Well, that's about all I have right now...good luck, I'll support 'Tenshi Gakuen' for as long as I live!
Wah...this is so nice... this isn't at all boring. If possible, please update soon! Sorry that I've simply no ideas at the present moment...sorry! I'll try to think of suggestions...
Maybe you can play around with those spiritual stuffs or...um, maybe school festivals? Well, that's kinda ordinary but at least it could get you going for a few more chaps and maybe...you could think up the rest of the chaps while writing those?
Good luck and hope this could continue smoothly! Or maybe you could write more about each character's lifestyle/personality and etc... Well, that's about all I have right now...good luck, I'll support 'Tenshi Gakuen' for as long as I live!
4/9/2004 c3 naraolla
Wah...you've FINALLY updated! This chap isn't that boring, it's kinda nice...hope you'll update soon! But if you couldn't, I wouldn't blame you since school is terrible!
Wah...you've FINALLY updated! This chap isn't that boring, it's kinda nice...hope you'll update soon! But if you couldn't, I wouldn't blame you since school is terrible!
3/18/2004 c2 naraolla
Wah...it's so nice! This chap sorta cleared my confusion...so keep up da good work! I love this!
Wah...it's so nice! This chap sorta cleared my confusion...so keep up da good work! I love this!
3/18/2004 c1 naraolla
This is nice, though I get confused over many things...hope you'll get the first chap out soon! Overall, I think I'll love this story...
PS: I'm a Singaporean too!
This is nice, though I get confused over many things...hope you'll get the first chap out soon! Overall, I think I'll love this story...
PS: I'm a Singaporean too!