for The Daydreamer5/16/2004 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
True... I like this... It has this free feeling... great rhymes... well done...
True... I like this... It has this free feeling... great rhymes... well done...
3/19/2004 c1 K. Evenstar
Thanks for the reviews.
I really like this poem. The rhyme scheme is different in stanza 2 (couplets) - is that deliberate? Maybe you could make it into a song and have that as a chorus. Just an idea.
Thanks for the reviews.
I really like this poem. The rhyme scheme is different in stanza 2 (couplets) - is that deliberate? Maybe you could make it into a song and have that as a chorus. Just an idea.
3/17/2004 c1 origamikitty
Nice use of imagery and good flow. It brought a smile to my face. Please r&r some of my work sometime if it isn't too much trouble. I'm not logged in, but my username is origamikitty.
Nice use of imagery and good flow. It brought a smile to my face. Please r&r some of my work sometime if it isn't too much trouble. I'm not logged in, but my username is origamikitty.