5/16/2005 c15 2Lukertin
I'm almost gagging on the level of sugar I think I just injested (lol, not exactly a bad thing).

The only advice I have is that you try to be a little less like a reporter, it kind of reads like a personal log in places (like discussions seem too short and journalistic, etc). But why haven't you updated this in like...9 months? tsk tsk.

11/20/2004 c15 La Lady Byron
I love the story so far, I look forward to reading the chapters to come (Assuming there are chapters to come ^-^, which I hope there are!)

9/28/2004 c15 fire-fem
So good! Please continue! Please! This is fantastic!

9/2/2004 c1 Pink Cobra
Love it so far! love the way you captivated the characteristic of each character. lik to c another update!

8/30/2004 c14 Desert Illusion
Aw. How cute! Hehe, anyways, update soon, k?

8/26/2004 c12 Desert Illusion
Good chapter. Kinda cute. Update soon, k?

8/23/2004 c11 Kate
AW
this is great, I love where this story is going! keep up the good work!

8/19/2004 c9 3aislinsidhe
You have a very good characterization of Arianell and Kevin. It's very easy to believe they're real. Very good job...keep it up.