for Behind Walls of Black Crystal2/28/2006 c1 
77SilentStones
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It flows well, and the imagery is very powerful. It's almost as if I can imagine the words being constricted by black crystal wall; a thought helped by the way the last few lines become smaller.
Good work, and thankyou for your review.Kayla
77SilentStonesI really enjoyed reading this poem. It flows well, and the imagery is very powerful. It's almost as if I can imagine the words being constricted by black crystal wall; a thought helped by the way the last few lines become smaller.
Good work, and thankyou for your review.Kayla
9/28/2004 c1 3Glassed Rose
That was really good! go you! *holds up peace sigh* you rock! very very very good poem...
3Glassed RoseThat was really good! go you! *holds up peace sigh* you rock! very very very good poem...
6/6/2004 c1 80Visions of Harmony
wow! thats just...wow! i cant describe it...though you obviously can and have! this is such an AMAZING piece! i feel at some time i could relate to this, like in my past. that is just...*awed face*...I'm lost for words, and it's not often that THAT happens!
rozie x x x
80Visions of Harmonywow! thats just...wow! i cant describe it...though you obviously can and have! this is such an AMAZING piece! i feel at some time i could relate to this, like in my past. that is just...*awed face*...I'm lost for words, and it's not often that THAT happens!
rozie x x x
5/6/2004 c1 58Decaying Dreams
Wicky... That is a bit different. I like it! Bwhaha. I love reviewing your poems. :)
58Decaying DreamsWicky... That is a bit different. I like it! Bwhaha. I love reviewing your poems. :)
4/29/2004 c1 Mbwun
Very dark; that impression is reinforced by the use of the dark (in color) imagery.
~He Who Walks On All Fours
Very dark; that impression is reinforced by the use of the dark (in color) imagery.
~He Who Walks On All Fours
4/29/2004 c1 191nine iron
Hello again wisdom filled Sterces, Nine Iron greets you.
I was encaptured by the title here, it drew me in like a jellyfish to a foot. The poems boney fingers reached from the screen and scratched long gone fingernail marks into my heart, where the effects of this poem will exist beyond time. It is angst at its best. Performed, not written. The pleas of the voice in pitch make the lines left by the hand itch.
Beyond a review
Nine Iron
191nine ironHello again wisdom filled Sterces, Nine Iron greets you.
I was encaptured by the title here, it drew me in like a jellyfish to a foot. The poems boney fingers reached from the screen and scratched long gone fingernail marks into my heart, where the effects of this poem will exist beyond time. It is angst at its best. Performed, not written. The pleas of the voice in pitch make the lines left by the hand itch.
Beyond a review
Nine Iron
4/24/2004 c1 123Pandabear575
this one is so sad yet i understand it and its very well worded...i like it very much...please keep writting
~mandi
123Pandabear575this one is so sad yet i understand it and its very well worded...i like it very much...please keep writting
~mandi
4/23/2004 c1 41Razor Sharp Kisses
I love this piece. Wow...the images - they're so clear and vivid. I love the words you used, the style, everything. It sort of reminded me of a dark bohemian setting. I don't know why.
41Razor Sharp KissesI love this piece. Wow...the images - they're so clear and vivid. I love the words you used, the style, everything. It sort of reminded me of a dark bohemian setting. I don't know why.
4/16/2004 c1 34Vivian Strong
oo very morbid but beautiful in it's own way. interesting no punctuation. although i do that alot lol. there are no words to describe the beauty of what you've created its really nice i love it!
Vivi
34Vivian Strongoo very morbid but beautiful in it's own way. interesting no punctuation. although i do that alot lol. there are no words to describe the beauty of what you've created its really nice i love it!
Vivi
4/9/2004 c1 49Bleeding Ink
I like this one. The descriptions are really good. And the last three lines are pretty dark, but somewhat true. Good job. this is cool
49Bleeding InkI like this one. The descriptions are really good. And the last three lines are pretty dark, but somewhat true. Good job. this is cool
4/6/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
i LOVE IT.. Your word choice is perfect. I read it out loud..and the sounds ..just sound beuatiful together. The last two lines are so sad, gorgeous in a heart-breaking sort of way.
144Infinite Smilesi LOVE IT.. Your word choice is perfect. I read it out loud..and the sounds ..just sound beuatiful together. The last two lines are so sad, gorgeous in a heart-breaking sort of way.