for Love4/11/2004 c1 Feyth Quinlan
great poem, you are an excellent writer, its obvious by the fact that you can protray emotion. try a different formatt though. you seem to write the same way often. while rhyming is effective it gets tedious and forced...keep up the good work and thanks for my review
great poem, you are an excellent writer, its obvious by the fact that you can protray emotion. try a different formatt though. you seem to write the same way often. while rhyming is effective it gets tedious and forced...keep up the good work and thanks for my review
4/10/2004 c1 mi-amor-de-ballin
This is great I know that I've felt this way before. Thanx for the review too!
This is great I know that I've felt this way before. Thanx for the review too!
4/10/2004 c1 
5Marrin E. Witmer
It's a nice poem. Try using some other writting styles. The AA BB CC DD scheme gets tiring to the eyes. Try some spacing, too. Do stanzas, their less straining to read. Just some tips. You don't need to use them.
5Marrin E. WitmerIt's a nice poem. Try using some other writting styles. The AA BB CC DD scheme gets tiring to the eyes. Try some spacing, too. Do stanzas, their less straining to read. Just some tips. You don't need to use them.
4/9/2004 c1 DarkDepression
...that...was...awsome! Sad, but still awsome. I wish I could write like that.
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...that...was...awsome! Sad, but still awsome. I wish I could write like that.
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4/9/2004 c1 35seriouseffort
Thankies for reviewing my poems. I personally like yours much more. Beautiful description and...you left me quite speechless. ^_^ Great job
35seriouseffortThankies for reviewing my poems. I personally like yours much more. Beautiful description and...you left me quite speechless. ^_^ Great job
4/9/2004 c1 9Crazy Arms
This poem I feel is very true. Once a person you feel for leaves you, everything goes wrong. I like how you stated the emotions in short sentances. I can tell you've been there. So have I. :(
Good job though and thanks for reviewing mine!
9Crazy ArmsThis poem I feel is very true. Once a person you feel for leaves you, everything goes wrong. I like how you stated the emotions in short sentances. I can tell you've been there. So have I. :(
Good job though and thanks for reviewing mine!
4/9/2004 c1 The Rejection
Hmm.. a bit bitter, huh? But I like your poem! Very truthful.
Please review back. I have no idea how good my stories are... or how bad.
Hmm.. a bit bitter, huh? But I like your poem! Very truthful.
Please review back. I have no idea how good my stories are... or how bad.
4/6/2004 c1 20Sonic Speed
This describes love well, especially the way the word is treated today. Nice poem!
20Sonic SpeedThis describes love well, especially the way the word is treated today. Nice poem!
4/6/2004 c1 5Crimsonoaks
Hey i really liked the ending. In my opinion it dragged on a little but otherwise it was good. Watch the grammar though, twice you wrote "you" when it should have been "your" or something like that. But i really liked the last two lines.
5CrimsonoaksHey i really liked the ending. In my opinion it dragged on a little but otherwise it was good. Watch the grammar though, twice you wrote "you" when it should have been "your" or something like that. But i really liked the last two lines.
4/6/2004 c1 39TabusVakarian
Been there, experienced those numb feelings from heart break. Beautifully written, your emotions are clearly expressed. ^_^
39TabusVakarianBeen there, experienced those numb feelings from heart break. Beautifully written, your emotions are clearly expressed. ^_^