for Alone4/12/2004 c1 
5A ABSENTMINDED PSYCHO KILLER
I really like you poems. Depressing is what I like. very good!
5A ABSENTMINDED PSYCHO KILLERI really like you poems. Depressing is what I like. very good!
4/11/2004 c1 Rose of Darkness 666
Once again, very very good. I think you could make a living on your poetry if you really wanted to.
Once again, very very good. I think you could make a living on your poetry if you really wanted to.
4/10/2004 c1 3katmeister
This is a very moving poem and you've captured the feeling very well. You are very good with words, though I have one critique...the rhythm is kind of irregular for a rhyming poem but this is trivial. Keep up the good work! and thanks for the review on my story.
3katmeisterThis is a very moving poem and you've captured the feeling very well. You are very good with words, though I have one critique...the rhythm is kind of irregular for a rhyming poem but this is trivial. Keep up the good work! and thanks for the review on my story.
4/10/2004 c1 49livelikeyourdying
I enjoyed it. It has alot of emotions and thoughts that people can relate to. keep on writing goog job
49livelikeyourdyingI enjoyed it. It has alot of emotions and thoughts that people can relate to. keep on writing goog job
4/7/2004 c1 39Laric
I like it is powerful only one thing the buy part should just be by I suggest using spell check it helps it look mor professional
39LaricI like it is powerful only one thing the buy part should just be by I suggest using spell check it helps it look mor professional
4/6/2004 c1 5Crimsonoaks
This was good, but you should break it up when you change subjects. it wuld just make it nicer to read. I liked your ending lines.
5CrimsonoaksThis was good, but you should break it up when you change subjects. it wuld just make it nicer to read. I liked your ending lines.