for Lost5/8/2004 c1 
14kamaitachiakira
this... is great..! a deep suffocating poem. i wish i could take that last step you wrote... cool.. keep writing...
14kamaitachiakirathis... is great..! a deep suffocating poem. i wish i could take that last step you wrote... cool.. keep writing...
4/12/2004 c1 Bamboti
i like this one a lot! *claps hands*. it was a pleasure to read. i wrote one called lost too, but it's different. check it out if u wnat.
CA
i like this one a lot! *claps hands*. it was a pleasure to read. i wrote one called lost too, but it's different. check it out if u wnat.
CA
4/10/2004 c1 22GjK
Nice, I could really relate. The poem had nice idea assortment and really conveyed emotion. Thanks for reviewing my poem by the way.
22GjKNice, I could really relate. The poem had nice idea assortment and really conveyed emotion. Thanks for reviewing my poem by the way.
4/10/2004 c1 2miraonawall
Another awesome poem. A lot of your poetry lets me relate to it. I think you have a gift with words and conveying feelings. Fabulous! :)
2miraonawallAnother awesome poem. A lot of your poetry lets me relate to it. I think you have a gift with words and conveying feelings. Fabulous! :)
4/10/2004 c1 71meaningless parasite
really well written and very expressive but cant help but feel the rhming holds you back a bit. u should try to write a poem in free verse, cuz u seem to have a really good way with words
71meaningless parasitereally well written and very expressive but cant help but feel the rhming holds you back a bit. u should try to write a poem in free verse, cuz u seem to have a really good way with words
4/9/2004 c1 9Crazy Arms
good rhyming schemes...
i'd like you to try a new form... basically for variation
9Crazy Armsgood rhyming schemes...
i'd like you to try a new form... basically for variation
4/9/2004 c1 11Word-Waterfall
*Stares at screen for 10 minutes*
*manages to move a tiny bit*
Wow, that was smegging AMAZING!
jUST WOW
*returns to staring at screen in awe*
11Word-Waterfall*Stares at screen for 10 minutes*
*manages to move a tiny bit*
Wow, that was smegging AMAZING!
jUST WOW
*returns to staring at screen in awe*
4/6/2004 c1 5Crimsonoaks
I liked how in this poem you ended on a hopeful note. Grammar: i think without is one word. you have it as two. The way you made me feel trapped as well was great.
5CrimsonoaksI liked how in this poem you ended on a hopeful note. Grammar: i think without is one word. you have it as two. The way you made me feel trapped as well was great.