for Junk3/30/2004 c1 
30her descent
ooh, this one has a really cool flow/rhythm, too. the repetition you used really worked. love the lines about the kamikaze dreams (neat way to describe that, btw... very original), and specifically "Cause I'll never be a hero,/ I tell far too many lies"... don't know how to describe it, but it's cool. nice. :)
30her descentooh, this one has a really cool flow/rhythm, too. the repetition you used really worked. love the lines about the kamikaze dreams (neat way to describe that, btw... very original), and specifically "Cause I'll never be a hero,/ I tell far too many lies"... don't know how to describe it, but it's cool. nice. :)
3/20/2004 c1 84Escapist
Amazing. Intriguing. Worthy of a thousand adjectives.
I love the kamikaze dreams and the immaculate flow. The spider webs, baby falls, him screaming until he's raw...
The cracks; the pretty cracks. It's all just ... incredible.
84EscapistAmazing. Intriguing. Worthy of a thousand adjectives.
I love the kamikaze dreams and the immaculate flow. The spider webs, baby falls, him screaming until he's raw...
The cracks; the pretty cracks. It's all just ... incredible.
3/20/2004 c1 12Bleachedclouds
Enigma thy name is 'strange angsty sorta poetry with vaguely disturbing undertones' a long name but appropriate XD
Glad you liked it! Reviews mean a lot!
And in my book different IS good :b So thats like a compliment on its own! heh.
I'm gonna shut up now..
12BleachedcloudsEnigma thy name is 'strange angsty sorta poetry with vaguely disturbing undertones' a long name but appropriate XD
Glad you liked it! Reviews mean a lot!
And in my book different IS good :b So thats like a compliment on its own! heh.
I'm gonna shut up now..