for Deadly Games4/20/2005 c3 
73aims80
I like this so far, don't know if you are planning on writing more but if you are it would be good.
73aims80I like this so far, don't know if you are planning on writing more but if you are it would be good.
4/26/2004 c1 16Dream and Write
Wow, very… interesting to put it plainly. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
http:/ucps.proboards30.com/
16Dream and WriteWow, very… interesting to put it plainly. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
http:/ucps.proboards30.com/
4/25/2004 c2 24Colonel Augen
well writen, you can feel the atmosqpere of the group, the tension for the games...
24Colonel Augenwell writen, you can feel the atmosqpere of the group, the tension for the games...
4/10/2004 c1 10lynx wings
Nice. Interesting twist on the vampire mythology. The witch vs. vampire thing sort of reminds me of In the Forests of the Night, but not by much. This is going on my favorites.
10lynx wingsNice. Interesting twist on the vampire mythology. The witch vs. vampire thing sort of reminds me of In the Forests of the Night, but not by much. This is going on my favorites.
3/21/2004 c1 pewpewpera fah wef
Ohh, interesting. I like the character development you have here. It could use a little more scenery description, but it's pretty good the way it is.
happy hunting,
~Midnight Predator~
Ohh, interesting. I like the character development you have here. It could use a little more scenery description, but it's pretty good the way it is.
happy hunting,
~Midnight Predator~
3/20/2004 c1 24Colonel Augen
I piked your story randomly, the summary looking promising, and it was. I liked it very much, but I'd love to know what happens next... The way you take the different caracters point of view is interesting. well, waiting for the rest of the story. gd bye
24Colonel AugenI piked your story randomly, the summary looking promising, and it was. I liked it very much, but I'd love to know what happens next... The way you take the different caracters point of view is interesting. well, waiting for the rest of the story. gd bye