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3/24/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
So sad.. i love the repetition and short phrases. It made it more powerful. Well done.
3/22/2004 c1 Evo
.:claps:. ^-^ great poem! i get where this comes from, my dad's the same. Think's i'm ten and wonders why i'm driving the car, thinks i play violin and wonders why i go to the band concerts instead yadda yadda yadda ^-^ ah well. It's amazing how many people out there seem to have the same story
3/20/2004 c1 169Siberia82
Hello fellow Canadian,
Good poem. I understand your pain, because dad is quite negligent, too. You express yourself well in your writing. Do continue!
P.S. Would you consider reading "Never to Return"? I'd like to hear from you.
P.P.S. Since you're from Canada, perhaps you'd be interested in my semi-fictional story called "Unravel". Read the summary, if you're curious.
3/20/2004 c1 25bummer
That sucks yeah. I'm sorry.

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