for Hopeless5/9/2004 c1 AMildlyPsychoCat
*tears form* man...*cries* it was so true, so beautiful...so perfect... i-i need a moment *turns around and cries some more*
*tears form* man...*cries* it was so true, so beautiful...so perfect... i-i need a moment *turns around and cries some more*
4/12/2004 c1 
15Swimmababez
Very good, I think we all feel hopeless at one point. I think you expressed it really great here..
15SwimmababezVery good, I think we all feel hopeless at one point. I think you expressed it really great here..
4/12/2004 c1 5A ABSENTMINDED PSYCHO KILLER
Very good. I feel that way sometimes too, and you put it perfectly into the poem.
p.s you r&rd mine so, I'll do the same!
5A ABSENTMINDED PSYCHO KILLERVery good. I feel that way sometimes too, and you put it perfectly into the poem.
p.s you r&rd mine so, I'll do the same!
4/11/2004 c1 Rose of Darkness 666
Excellent. I know how that feels :( But I'm sure everybody does at some point right? Anyway, great job once again!
Excellent. I know how that feels :( But I'm sure everybody does at some point right? Anyway, great job once again!
4/9/2004 c1 5Jord
Not bad! Hits home with a lot of folks, I figure. Certainly reminds me of adolescence. I can only hope that as we get older we don't forget about that stage in our lives. Because it's actually then that we can identify with our siblings, children, etc.
5JordNot bad! Hits home with a lot of folks, I figure. Certainly reminds me of adolescence. I can only hope that as we get older we don't forget about that stage in our lives. Because it's actually then that we can identify with our siblings, children, etc.
4/9/2004 c1 9Crazy Arms
I get depressed quite easily when things are going wrong and out of wack. I feel exactly the way your poem describes. I always have stuff on my mind, but my parents never care to listen. They belittle me instead of helping me when I'm quote unquote depressed. I like this one because of the many feelings incorporated.
9Crazy ArmsI get depressed quite easily when things are going wrong and out of wack. I feel exactly the way your poem describes. I always have stuff on my mind, but my parents never care to listen. They belittle me instead of helping me when I'm quote unquote depressed. I like this one because of the many feelings incorporated.
4/8/2004 c1 41Chlorinated Pi
Cool poem. I really like what you're saying. Everyone feels hopeless, and you put the emotion into words really well.
41Chlorinated PiCool poem. I really like what you're saying. Everyone feels hopeless, and you put the emotion into words really well.
4/8/2004 c1 4Mizuko Saino
wow. nice. i like the beginning THE best. I'm posting more already, so check back! ^_^
4Mizuko Sainowow. nice. i like the beginning THE best. I'm posting more already, so check back! ^_^
4/6/2004 c1 5Crimsonoaks
This was a pretty good poem, but i would like to debate the beginning and end. They dont seem to fit in with the middle. Granted, i may be wrong, but still that is what i think. Otherwise it is good.
5CrimsonoaksThis was a pretty good poem, but i would like to debate the beginning and end. They dont seem to fit in with the middle. Granted, i may be wrong, but still that is what i think. Otherwise it is good.
4/6/2004 c1 28CydCharisse
That was quite good. I liked how you're talking about deciding on who you are. It's hard in this society to express yourself. *sigh*
Grand poem, I
28CydCharisseThat was quite good. I liked how you're talking about deciding on who you are. It's hard in this society to express yourself. *sigh*
Grand poem, I