for Obsession9/2/2004 c10 Lily
-“Tell me,” he said, apparently ignoring my question, “Do you always sleep with guys and then avoid them afterwards?”-
She should have replied with:
"Tell ME. Do you always drug and rape girls when you go to parties? Or was this just your first successful attempt?"
-“Tell me,” he said, apparently ignoring my question, “Do you always sleep with guys and then avoid them afterwards?”-
She should have replied with:
"Tell ME. Do you always drug and rape girls when you go to parties? Or was this just your first successful attempt?"
9/2/2004 c10 TigHan
I've already read this, haven't i? so did i beta it, or is my computer being stupid as usual? hmm, don't really care, cuz i'm getting a new one! *does happy dance* anyways, geez child i was so bored yesterday cuz you couldn't come over! and btw, i've started working on my story for the short story contest (lol yes i know i'm a loser) so could you maybe beta it for me at school? thx very much! cheerio
I've already read this, haven't i? so did i beta it, or is my computer being stupid as usual? hmm, don't really care, cuz i'm getting a new one! *does happy dance* anyways, geez child i was so bored yesterday cuz you couldn't come over! and btw, i've started working on my story for the short story contest (lol yes i know i'm a loser) so could you maybe beta it for me at school? thx very much! cheerio
8/28/2004 c9 dreamingofflyingaway
hun! *hugs* I'm back! as of yesterday! i can't wait to finally catch up with you again! of course you know this chapter was excellent, and I'm dying to read the next one!
love ya
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
hun! *hugs* I'm back! as of yesterday! i can't wait to finally catch up with you again! of course you know this chapter was excellent, and I'm dying to read the next one!
love ya
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
8/27/2004 c9 madmadmaddymad
I'm very late this time... lol... but I couldn't miss my chance to review! So here I am! Somehow, you've managed to addict me to your story. I guess it's like, the way everybody else was saying, even if it started out a little cliche (However, I did always like the way you weaved a sort of poetic rhythm into your story, making the whole thing just flow from one word to the next... you write well!)... it's still good... it's addictivley good! And we like updates! Even if Chloe is scared of finding out what her test results are, I beg to differ. I can't wait! Well, I suppose I CAN wait... but I'll be waiting on the tips of my toes...
I'm very late this time... lol... but I couldn't miss my chance to review! So here I am! Somehow, you've managed to addict me to your story. I guess it's like, the way everybody else was saying, even if it started out a little cliche (However, I did always like the way you weaved a sort of poetic rhythm into your story, making the whole thing just flow from one word to the next... you write well!)... it's still good... it's addictivley good! And we like updates! Even if Chloe is scared of finding out what her test results are, I beg to differ. I can't wait! Well, I suppose I CAN wait... but I'll be waiting on the tips of my toes...
8/19/2004 c9 
29babypig
yay! you updated!
tun-tun-tun *dramatic music*
cant wait till she tells luke!
eek!
-kiko aka "the pig"
29babypigyay! you updated!
tun-tun-tun *dramatic music*
cant wait till she tells luke!
eek!
-kiko aka "the pig"
8/12/2004 c9 7TigHan
okay, anywayz, now i am going to continue what i was going to say in the last review! this is an amazing story, btw. how are you going to end it? let's see... there are several possibilities, u know. (lol, i sound like such a retard, but i'm gonna say this anyways.) she could be pregnant, she could be not pregnant, she could graduate from hi school and never tell neone, she could go out with luke (i like that possibility!)... ok i'm bored now.
uggh, do you know what i've been singing for the past HOUR? the friend. GR! becuz i have to sing it tomorrow at calaway park (7:00pm the show starts. be there or be square! lol)
btw, i just finished reading this book called Seventeenth Summer by Maureen Dalys (i think?). You should read it, you can borrow it from me if you like. Also, to give you inspiration, i have this book called Speak (don't know the author. ever heard of it?) and it's about a girl who was raped and then she doesn't tell anyone. i bet it would be good ideas for this story. (lol. me fail english? that's unpossible!)
go on msn! lol.
7TigHanokay, anywayz, now i am going to continue what i was going to say in the last review! this is an amazing story, btw. how are you going to end it? let's see... there are several possibilities, u know. (lol, i sound like such a retard, but i'm gonna say this anyways.) she could be pregnant, she could be not pregnant, she could graduate from hi school and never tell neone, she could go out with luke (i like that possibility!)... ok i'm bored now.
uggh, do you know what i've been singing for the past HOUR? the friend. GR! becuz i have to sing it tomorrow at calaway park (7:00pm the show starts. be there or be square! lol)
btw, i just finished reading this book called Seventeenth Summer by Maureen Dalys (i think?). You should read it, you can borrow it from me if you like. Also, to give you inspiration, i have this book called Speak (don't know the author. ever heard of it?) and it's about a girl who was raped and then she doesn't tell anyone. i bet it would be good ideas for this story. (lol. me fail english? that's unpossible!)
go on msn! lol.
8/12/2004 c8 TigHan
lauren! how has my darling writing buddy been? we should definitely get together! how's your summer so far? (have i already asked you that?) anyways, i still have one more chappie to read (i got behind cuz of italy) but i just wanted to say... i guessed jake was lying! b4 you explained how jake was really talking about himself instead of damien i guess what was going to happen! i am so proud of myself, lol. anywayz go on msn!
lauren! how has my darling writing buddy been? we should definitely get together! how's your summer so far? (have i already asked you that?) anyways, i still have one more chappie to read (i got behind cuz of italy) but i just wanted to say... i guessed jake was lying! b4 you explained how jake was really talking about himself instead of damien i guess what was going to happen! i am so proud of myself, lol. anywayz go on msn!
8/12/2004 c9 vintagewhitegloves
I like this story... it did start off as cliche... but it got so much better, I hope she isn't pregnant, 'cause that would just be way TOO cliche, and just ruin this great story. Anyways, I hope you update soon, it's great.
I like this story... it did start off as cliche... but it got so much better, I hope she isn't pregnant, 'cause that would just be way TOO cliche, and just ruin this great story. Anyways, I hope you update soon, it's great.
8/12/2004 c9 4anatidaephobiac
oh dear... STDs... pregnant... yikes. a bad situation to be in... bad indeed. and luke... she needs to clear some things up with him...
But great chapter... I loved it.
Update soon!
4anatidaephobiacoh dear... STDs... pregnant... yikes. a bad situation to be in... bad indeed. and luke... she needs to clear some things up with him...
But great chapter... I loved it.
Update soon!
8/12/2004 c9 26girl-23
Hey again. I like how you made the rest of the chapters a bit longer. The story overall is still a little cliche but it's good, and well written.
Thanks for reading my story "Everything is Better with Ben" I promise I'll update soon, I've just been busy with new stories. Check out my newest story "Forever and a Day", I think you'll like it. Thanks.
~Laura
26girl-23Hey again. I like how you made the rest of the chapters a bit longer. The story overall is still a little cliche but it's good, and well written.
Thanks for reading my story "Everything is Better with Ben" I promise I'll update soon, I've just been busy with new stories. Check out my newest story "Forever and a Day", I think you'll like it. Thanks.
~Laura
8/12/2004 c5 girl-23
Whoa what happened there? You've got the same chapter up twice. I don't know if you realized that or not. Just thought I'd let you know. I wonder what will happena the party? *Wanders off to read the next chapter*
~Laura
Whoa what happened there? You've got the same chapter up twice. I don't know if you realized that or not. Just thought I'd let you know. I wonder what will happena the party? *Wanders off to read the next chapter*
~Laura
8/12/2004 c2 girl-23
Hey I just came across your story here so I decided to read it since you've read a few of mine. These two chapters have been bit short so far, but the story line seems pretty good. I want to know where you're going to take this so I'm going to read more now.
~Laura
Hey I just came across your story here so I decided to read it since you've read a few of mine. These two chapters have been bit short so far, but the story line seems pretty good. I want to know where you're going to take this so I'm going to read more now.
~Laura
7/15/2004 c8 Mad-Cabbage
Oh, wow, it's updated! You get a cookie for the fast-ness of the update. *gives you a cookie* OH and I liked your chapter too! It's great! The only part I might have some complaint about is where you switched POV from Chloe to Luke and back again... It was a little weird, I was so used to Chloe narrating the story, and suddenly it was Luke. And, although it helps to understand what's going on through Luke's mind, it seems a little random because you didn't do anything like that in any of your other chapters. It was a good piece, though! Perhaps you should show us Luke's side of things more often...?
Oh, wow, it's updated! You get a cookie for the fast-ness of the update. *gives you a cookie* OH and I liked your chapter too! It's great! The only part I might have some complaint about is where you switched POV from Chloe to Luke and back again... It was a little weird, I was so used to Chloe narrating the story, and suddenly it was Luke. And, although it helps to understand what's going on through Luke's mind, it seems a little random because you didn't do anything like that in any of your other chapters. It was a good piece, though! Perhaps you should show us Luke's side of things more often...?