for Obsession7/15/2004 c5 
6puuuurfect angel
I've only mananged to get to here so far, but I will finish reading what you've got up so far this evening (hopefully). So this is one of those 'girl is in lust with school kock, girl's best male friend is in love with girl, girl doesn't know this, when push comes to shove who will girl chose?' stories. Well, I don't know yet, it might change in the next few chapters. How about I shut up now and just attempt to finish reading the story some time before the beginning of August?
6puuuurfect angelI've only mananged to get to here so far, but I will finish reading what you've got up so far this evening (hopefully). So this is one of those 'girl is in lust with school kock, girl's best male friend is in love with girl, girl doesn't know this, when push comes to shove who will girl chose?' stories. Well, I don't know yet, it might change in the next few chapters. How about I shut up now and just attempt to finish reading the story some time before the beginning of August?
7/14/2004 c8 29babypig
i love it!cant wait till you update. jakes a jerk! i cant wait till she gets with luke!
29babypigi love it!cant wait till you update. jakes a jerk! i cant wait till she gets with luke!
7/12/2004 c8 4anatidaephobiac
wow... so jake lied saying damien was like he really was... i kind of expected that... jake seemed like bad news.
what's going to happen now... with luke and everything?
update soon!
4anatidaephobiacwow... so jake lied saying damien was like he really was... i kind of expected that... jake seemed like bad news.
what's going to happen now... with luke and everything?
update soon!
7/12/2004 c8 dreamingofflyingaway
Hey hun! Long time no speak ne? Anywho, I'm so glad I FINALLY got to read this chapter! *cackle* but, sadly it's stirred a rather murderous part of me, so I guess I'll just have to kill Jake now. :D! lol, anyway, we did do some discussing etc., and I can't wait to see how this turns out
ciao for now,
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
Hey hun! Long time no speak ne? Anywho, I'm so glad I FINALLY got to read this chapter! *cackle* but, sadly it's stirred a rather murderous part of me, so I guess I'll just have to kill Jake now. :D! lol, anyway, we did do some discussing etc., and I can't wait to see how this turns out
ciao for now,
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
7/12/2004 c8 FlamingHeart109
Yay! Kudos to you for a great chapter! Jake is such an asshole...when is she going to tell Luke?
Yay! Kudos to you for a great chapter! Jake is such an asshole...when is she going to tell Luke?
7/12/2004 c8 Lily
I'm guessing that she was probably a virgin... Since he raped her, isn't it likely that she'd feel some pain from down below? Not everyone feels pain after losing their virginity, but I'd think that she'd at least feel SOMETHING because she had sex non-consensually. You know, having sex without any moisture or lubrication "down there", probably hurts.
I'm guessing that she was probably a virgin... Since he raped her, isn't it likely that she'd feel some pain from down below? Not everyone feels pain after losing their virginity, but I'd think that she'd at least feel SOMETHING because she had sex non-consensually. You know, having sex without any moisture or lubrication "down there", probably hurts.
7/11/2004 c7 madmadmaddymad
Wha? You're stopping there! You big meanie, I can't believe you'd do a cliffhanger like that, after such a long time with no update at all! *sob* And I want Luke to come back... *sob again* A very good chapter, my dear, but do you think we could get the next update in a little sooner? I'll love you forever, if you do!
Wha? You're stopping there! You big meanie, I can't believe you'd do a cliffhanger like that, after such a long time with no update at all! *sob* And I want Luke to come back... *sob again* A very good chapter, my dear, but do you think we could get the next update in a little sooner? I'll love you forever, if you do!
7/7/2004 c7 dreamingofflyingaway
*strolls in casually* long time no speak ne? well...this is the last message before I go to sleep..lol I should've gone earlier..tehehe..anyways, I know this is awesome so keep going...I'll hold off my murderous feelings towards Jake fore your sake [hah! I made a rhyme]..anyways, I should go, but yeehaw!
:D best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
*strolls in casually* long time no speak ne? well...this is the last message before I go to sleep..lol I should've gone earlier..tehehe..anyways, I know this is awesome so keep going...I'll hold off my murderous feelings towards Jake fore your sake [hah! I made a rhyme]..anyways, I should go, but yeehaw!
:D best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
7/7/2004 c7 anatidaephobiac
So Jake is bad... and could be lying completely about Damien...
Ahh confusion! You'll just have to update soon so I can figure out what's going on!
So Jake is bad... and could be lying completely about Damien...
Ahh confusion! You'll just have to update soon so I can figure out what's going on!
6/3/2004 c6 TigHan
OH! I know what's gonna happen! *singy voice* is chloe gonna get all drunk and crap at the party, and jake will turn out to just be using her, and then she will realize her true love for luke and live happily ever after! lol, i lead a depressing life. omg, i can't believe i won that math contest. i'm so dumb at those things! w/e. lol, i bet they marked mine wrong or something...
OH! I know what's gonna happen! *singy voice* is chloe gonna get all drunk and crap at the party, and jake will turn out to just be using her, and then she will realize her true love for luke and live happily ever after! lol, i lead a depressing life. omg, i can't believe i won that math contest. i'm so dumb at those things! w/e. lol, i bet they marked mine wrong or something...
5/31/2004 c6 dreamingofflyingaway
hey hun, I would write you the longest and most randomest of reviews, but French is being super gay, and so I need to review...forgive me for being a lazy tomato and not signing in, I just don't have the effort..*grunt* anyway, of course I know this chapter is wonderful, and all your other ones...I cannot wait for your subsequent updates..have fun and get well!
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
hey hun, I would write you the longest and most randomest of reviews, but French is being super gay, and so I need to review...forgive me for being a lazy tomato and not signing in, I just don't have the effort..*grunt* anyway, of course I know this chapter is wonderful, and all your other ones...I cannot wait for your subsequent updates..have fun and get well!
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
5/30/2004 c6 madmadmaddymad
Very excited! But I miss Luke already... he's gotta be at the party! It just wouldn't be fair if he didn't show up. =DD Okay, and now, I'm ready for another update!
Very excited! But I miss Luke already... he's gotta be at the party! It just wouldn't be fair if he didn't show up. =DD Okay, and now, I'm ready for another update!
5/29/2004 c6 anatidaephobiac
Awesome chapter... I loved it... I can definitely see why you're proud of it... I would be too!
I am very excited for the party... Luke should be going... but i'm still excited. Maybe he'll make a guest appearance? Or save the day?
Anyway... can't wait, update soon!
Awesome chapter... I loved it... I can definitely see why you're proud of it... I would be too!
I am very excited for the party... Luke should be going... but i'm still excited. Maybe he'll make a guest appearance? Or save the day?
Anyway... can't wait, update soon!
5/27/2004 c5 dreamingofflyingaway
good good keep going! must keep on updating hun! hope you're better as well, you're still a sickie aren't you?
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
good good keep going! must keep on updating hun! hope you're better as well, you're still a sickie aren't you?
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming