for Tears of an Angel6/1/2004 c2 errrror404
That is so great! I adore LuciferxMichael stories! That was so brilliant - you'd better update or I'll send nasty little soul-eating monkies to get you!
That is so great! I adore LuciferxMichael stories! That was so brilliant - you'd better update or I'll send nasty little soul-eating monkies to get you!
4/16/2004 c2 Caster
Hello! ^_^ Well, look at what I stummbled upon! I was actually looking for a Luci/Mike story, I just couldn't find one. According to some, Lucifer isn't actually Satan, and I like that idea so much better. Lucifer makes a great literary character and you use that to your advantage. You're a great writer, and I look forward to reading your next chapter!
Hello! ^_^ Well, look at what I stummbled upon! I was actually looking for a Luci/Mike story, I just couldn't find one. According to some, Lucifer isn't actually Satan, and I like that idea so much better. Lucifer makes a great literary character and you use that to your advantage. You're a great writer, and I look forward to reading your next chapter!
3/24/2004 c2 Codename Mastermind
Wee. Can't remember password. I already gave you my review on MSN.. so.. I hate to repeat myself, but I pretty much said it all there. Oh, and I can BETA if you want.. *blinks slowly* *trying to think of something else* What about Gabriel? DID YOU FORGET THE WONDERFUL-NESS THAT IS GABRIEL? Bow down, you inferior being! _ Whoa, sorry about that. *cough*
Yeah, so full sentences, no "don't" (instead use "do not").. that kind of thing. You could have made the 'Luce tells Michael' scene wait a bit longer. There's nothing wrong with keeping people in suspence. Except me. Don't do it to me. Ever. *shakes fist* Angel slash will rule the world! HEE!
~ Mastermind
Wee. Can't remember password. I already gave you my review on MSN.. so.. I hate to repeat myself, but I pretty much said it all there. Oh, and I can BETA if you want.. *blinks slowly* *trying to think of something else* What about Gabriel? DID YOU FORGET THE WONDERFUL-NESS THAT IS GABRIEL? Bow down, you inferior being! _ Whoa, sorry about that. *cough*
Yeah, so full sentences, no "don't" (instead use "do not").. that kind of thing. You could have made the 'Luce tells Michael' scene wait a bit longer. There's nothing wrong with keeping people in suspence. Except me. Don't do it to me. Ever. *shakes fist* Angel slash will rule the world! HEE!
~ Mastermind
3/24/2004 c2 Mana-chan
Do Chappie two quickly!
Do Chappie two quickly!
3/24/2004 c1 Mana-chan
YOU UPDATED! *Kissles* Anyone who is a homophobe should die!
YOU UPDATED! *Kissles* Anyone who is a homophobe should die!
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