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4/6/2004 c1 69t. Hudson
I fully agree with the last review. Personally, I would elaborate on it, but as is it is very good. To me, it stands alone as a type of (forgive the term, it is uaually used in psychiatry) "word salad." The sound of the words in your poem makes a sort of instrumental piece, if you will. I think with a little more it can be one of those poems which, upon multiple readings, conveys more and more meaning, both intended and unintended. I don't know, maybe it has that quality already. Good job at any rate; this is very good.
3/28/2004 c1 12Terra Tigra
Powerful but I'm not sure I get it ^.^; The lines are beautiful but since it so short it comes off very vague.
i think this has potential. I'd suggest extending on it. But thats just me ^.^;
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-

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