for Manda Rider 3: Endgame6/8/2004 c19 Anonymous
well thats not that bad. it beats dying, rite? and whats with michael? why doesn't anyone look for him? oh nvm just update really really soon!
well thats not that bad. it beats dying, rite? and whats with michael? why doesn't anyone look for him? oh nvm just update really really soon!
6/7/2004 c18 
2sahnetorte
Man, that's not good. his plan sort of worked, but michael's in trouble now!
i think Manda and Michael need to practice speaking in codes the next time. it's no wonder he couldn't make a head or tail out of it. and now he'd thought she's going to marry him! though it wouldn't be that bad.
2sahnetorteMan, that's not good. his plan sort of worked, but michael's in trouble now!
i think Manda and Michael need to practice speaking in codes the next time. it's no wonder he couldn't make a head or tail out of it. and now he'd thought she's going to marry him! though it wouldn't be that bad.
6/7/2004 c17 sahnetorte
That was good thinking on Michael's part. At least they know the area where Manda was prisoned.
so, Michael's an Arsenal fan. that's too bad. it would have been great if he was a Manchester utd fan! ;)
That was good thinking on Michael's part. At least they know the area where Manda was prisoned.
so, Michael's an Arsenal fan. that's too bad. it would have been great if he was a Manchester utd fan! ;)
6/7/2004 c16 sahnetorte
The plot thickens once again. What has Mr. Rider been keeping from Manda? that was great twist abouw finding the body.
and that bit of information about Michael and Leah was interesting.
The plot thickens once again. What has Mr. Rider been keeping from Manda? that was great twist abouw finding the body.
and that bit of information about Michael and Leah was interesting.
6/7/2004 c18 Silver Phoenix11
Wow, that was a fast update! Not cliffhanger again! WHat's going to happen to Michael?
Post more soon!
Wow, that was a fast update! Not cliffhanger again! WHat's going to happen to Michael?
Post more soon!
6/7/2004 c18 DrkAngel
OH. plz update asap. i need to know what happens
OH. plz update asap. i need to know what happens
6/4/2004 c16 tzncz
Wow. Very thrilling. Nearly lost Manda's dad... glad he's still alive... You're very descriptive. It makes the reader picture the scenes clearly. Keep it up!
Wow. Very thrilling. Nearly lost Manda's dad... glad he's still alive... You're very descriptive. It makes the reader picture the scenes clearly. Keep it up!
6/2/2004 c16 Silver Phoenix11
Eww! She found a hand!
Michael's conversation with that girl was interesting.
Post more soon!
Eww! She found a hand!
Michael's conversation with that girl was interesting.
Post more soon!
6/1/2004 c15 2sahnetorte
i've decided that Michael is sly and sneaky - in a good way, of course. he needs to be cunning to foil thorn's plan. i hope his plan's working.
update soon.
2sahnetortei've decided that Michael is sly and sneaky - in a good way, of course. he needs to be cunning to foil thorn's plan. i hope his plan's working.
update soon.
5/28/2004 c15 Silver Phoenix11
Wow, good thinking, Michael! At least Manda's dad still alive, though barely. yikes!
Post more soon!
Wow, good thinking, Michael! At least Manda's dad still alive, though barely. yikes!
Post more soon!
5/28/2004 c15 star
ooh the plot thickens. interesting. plz update soon!
ooh the plot thickens. interesting. plz update soon!
5/28/2004 c15 tzncz
Hm, so Michael is going to kill? Oh dear. Not good... Interesting chapter. His plan sounds pretty cool :) Very mysterious. Keep writing!
Hm, so Michael is going to kill? Oh dear. Not good... Interesting chapter. His plan sounds pretty cool :) Very mysterious. Keep writing!
5/28/2004 c13 tzncz
*GASP* Wow, what a cliffhanger! I know you've already put the next chapter on, but I just wanted to let you know... ARGH! Keep writing!
*GASP* Wow, what a cliffhanger! I know you've already put the next chapter on, but I just wanted to let you know... ARGH! Keep writing!