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2sahnetorte
the flashback added interesting background about michael. it showed that he has some vulnerability (sp?) and weaknesses.
i'm curious about his exgirlfriend. she seems desperate to get married to michael. the poor guy had enough of problems in his hands without hers.
update soon!
2sahnetortethe flashback added interesting background about michael. it showed that he has some vulnerability (sp?) and weaknesses.
i'm curious about his exgirlfriend. she seems desperate to get married to michael. the poor guy had enough of problems in his hands without hers.
update soon!
5/26/2004 c13 sahnetorte
That's a cruel way to end a chapter. I know Mr.Rider is not a perfect father, I hope you're not intending of killing him. That would be very harsh for Manda.
This chapter answered some questions, and brought out new ones. what did thorn want from Mr. rider?
That's a cruel way to end a chapter. I know Mr.Rider is not a perfect father, I hope you're not intending of killing him. That would be very harsh for Manda.
This chapter answered some questions, and brought out new ones. what did thorn want from Mr. rider?
5/26/2004 c14 starr
great job update soon
great job update soon
5/26/2004 c14 7Lightness
killing people is bad... which is why plans are good.
ya know, poor michael. his favorite person has been kidnapped, he has to kill somebody and this random girl is going crazy about marrying him. pretty much sucks for the kid.
anyway. great chapters. youre doing a very nice job of building up the plot.
ya know, i was hoping that you would continue on with what was happening to mandas dad, but you didnt which is why you need to update really soon.
7Lightnesskilling people is bad... which is why plans are good.
ya know, poor michael. his favorite person has been kidnapped, he has to kill somebody and this random girl is going crazy about marrying him. pretty much sucks for the kid.
anyway. great chapters. youre doing a very nice job of building up the plot.
ya know, i was hoping that you would continue on with what was happening to mandas dad, but you didnt which is why you need to update really soon.
5/26/2004 c13 Lightness
that is horrible. horrible horrible. you cant kill her dad. its her birthday. poor manda.
so that airport thing really was a setup. that makes sense.
where did mandas dad hide what?
that is horrible. horrible horrible. you cant kill her dad. its her birthday. poor manda.
so that airport thing really was a setup. that makes sense.
where did mandas dad hide what?
5/26/2004 c12 Lightness
michaels father is one messed up kid. he wouldnt defend his own innocent son, but he defends a crimlord. thats just weordly wrong.
its obvious that thorn is working for rodriguez but how did rodriguez ever know that thorn hated michael?
michaels father is one messed up kid. he wouldnt defend his own innocent son, but he defends a crimlord. thats just weordly wrong.
its obvious that thorn is working for rodriguez but how did rodriguez ever know that thorn hated michael?
5/22/2004 c13 Brooke ORiley
death take him! stupid bloody villains! argh!
death take him! stupid bloody villains! argh!
5/21/2004 c13 starflame
wow MAJOR cliffhanger
update...NOW
wow MAJOR cliffhanger
update...NOW
5/21/2004 c12 tzncz
Nice chapter. We finally find out about Michael... mysterious, very mysterious. And happy birthday to Manda! Keep writing!
Nice chapter. We finally find out about Michael... mysterious, very mysterious. And happy birthday to Manda! Keep writing!
5/20/2004 c12 Silverstar Princess
this is great, keep it up!
this is great, keep it up!
5/17/2004 c11 Brooke ORiley
so they finally got her, eh? 'twas bound to happen...
go michael go! get her back!
so they finally got her, eh? 'twas bound to happen...
go michael go! get her back!
5/16/2004 c11 2sahnetorte
Cliffhanger again, and on her birthday nonetheless! but it's nice to see they're not fighting anymore.
Update soon.
2sahnetorteCliffhanger again, and on her birthday nonetheless! but it's nice to see they're not fighting anymore.
Update soon.