5/5/2004 c8 Brooke ORiley
down with thorn! death take him!
don't sell the dress, manda! silly girl...and open your present!
^_^ keep going, i love it!
down with thorn! death take him!
don't sell the dress, manda! silly girl...and open your present!
^_^ keep going, i love it!
5/3/2004 c7 2sahnetorte
Great action. It's kind of sad to see them fighting like that though. I hope they make up soon.
Great action. It's kind of sad to see them fighting like that though. I hope they make up soon.
4/30/2004 c7 Silver Phoenix11
WAAHH! Poor Manda. She needs your support, Michael, you idiot! The drama! Post more!
WAAHH! Poor Manda. She needs your support, Michael, you idiot! The drama! Post more!
4/30/2004 c7 Brooke ORiley
stupid kidnapper people! update, update!
stupid kidnapper people! update, update!
4/29/2004 c6 7Lightness
mysterious phone call and a seemingly-random theft.
thats all very suspicious, if ya ask me.
well, ive finally caught up. i wanna read more. you gots to write more soon. bye till then.
mysterious phone call and a seemingly-random theft.
thats all very suspicious, if ya ask me.
well, ive finally caught up. i wanna read more. you gots to write more soon. bye till then.
4/29/2004 c5 Lightness
phew. manda and michael turned out okay.
and mandas dad.. what happened to him? i was kinda expecting that after their fight but really now, dont kill the poor guy.
manda and michael do some do some crazy-spontaneous things in this chapter. that cant be too good.
phew. manda and michael turned out okay.
and mandas dad.. what happened to him? i was kinda expecting that after their fight but really now, dont kill the poor guy.
manda and michael do some do some crazy-spontaneous things in this chapter. that cant be too good.
4/29/2004 c4 Lightness
gasp.
you stopped at a cliff hanger. this is prolly the most horrendious cliff hanger youve ever done. its a good thing i can keep reading.. or else i would have been very upset.
aside from the hangingness of it, that was a very nice chapter.
gasp.
you stopped at a cliff hanger. this is prolly the most horrendious cliff hanger youve ever done. its a good thing i can keep reading.. or else i would have been very upset.
aside from the hangingness of it, that was a very nice chapter.
4/27/2004 c6 2sahnetorte
I wonder if the theft was random, or only targeted on Manda. This is getting interesting.
I wonder if the theft was random, or only targeted on Manda. This is getting interesting.
4/27/2004 c6 Brooke ORiley
eehee! it gets better and better! keep updating, please!
eehee! it gets better and better! keep updating, please!
4/20/2004 c5 Brooke ORiley
this doesn't bode well, does it? oh, well...i hope nothing too terrible happens to poor manda...and her daddy. o.o;; though with the past two books, i certainly can't trust you to leave her alone, can i? ah, well...good work! post more!
this doesn't bode well, does it? oh, well...i hope nothing too terrible happens to poor manda...and her daddy. o.o;; though with the past two books, i certainly can't trust you to leave her alone, can i? ah, well...good work! post more!
4/18/2004 c4 sahnetorte
This is not good for Manda and Michael. You stop at the cliffhanger. Update soon.
This is not good for Manda and Michael. You stop at the cliffhanger. Update soon.
4/15/2004 c3 7Lightness
'“Oh, sheesh! I’ve got a zit.”' lol. that was great. that whole conversation was great.
hm.. soo that angela girl just randomly comes knocking on michaels door and asks to get married. thats weird. whats going on with that? write more soon. i cant wait to see what happens.
'“Oh, sheesh! I’ve got a zit.”' lol. that was great. that whole conversation was great.
hm.. soo that angela girl just randomly comes knocking on michaels door and asks to get married. thats weird. whats going on with that? write more soon. i cant wait to see what happens.
4/12/2004 c3 2sahnetorte
That was excellent. I always find Michael to be someone mysterious yet interesting character.
That was excellent. I always find Michael to be someone mysterious yet interesting character.