for Dream?11/2/2004 c1 UnsungbutWritten
Great poem! The imagery is amazing and captivating. It also flows well, and you finished the poem off well. Good job. ^^
Great poem! The imagery is amazing and captivating. It also flows well, and you finished the poem off well. Good job. ^^
7/11/2004 c1 
9Amethyst Angel
Wow, that was pretty cool. I loved the images, the thought processes that must have gone into this. Very nicely done.
9Amethyst AngelWow, that was pretty cool. I loved the images, the thought processes that must have gone into this. Very nicely done.
5/26/2004 c1 The Rejection
Wow... that was really intriguing. I enjoyed it.
And I'm sorry you had to take your story down. I would have enjoyed reading it, I think. That's too bad.
Wow... that was really intriguing. I enjoyed it.
And I'm sorry you had to take your story down. I would have enjoyed reading it, I think. That's too bad.
4/22/2004 c1 48Morcirith
Very sensory. I felt swept into the color and light of the shore and sky that you described. I think of summer camp. M, smores...
48MorcirithVery sensory. I felt swept into the color and light of the shore and sky that you described. I think of summer camp. M, smores...
4/11/2004 c1 48Silent Laughter
...okay, I think I ought to stop reading your poems if I value any aspect of self-respect. you are the best poet! This is my favourite so far... I like the 'abstract' poetry a lot, and this is abstract at its best. ^^ once again, you have an awesome vocabulary and a lot of great ideas... the whole "harline fractures appear on the sky" thing was awesome! Where do you get your inspiration? you have my envy. and my reviews. ^^
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48Silent Laughter...okay, I think I ought to stop reading your poems if I value any aspect of self-respect. you are the best poet! This is my favourite so far... I like the 'abstract' poetry a lot, and this is abstract at its best. ^^ once again, you have an awesome vocabulary and a lot of great ideas... the whole "harline fractures appear on the sky" thing was awesome! Where do you get your inspiration? you have my envy. and my reviews. ^^
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4/1/2004 c1 107Lover-of-Heartbreak
The end surprised me...but the poem was very good...more complex than most poems and I like it.
107Lover-of-HeartbreakThe end surprised me...but the poem was very good...more complex than most poems and I like it.
3/27/2004 c1 14i am classic
I like the line 'humans were not meant to invade' The whole piece is very good.
14i am classicI like the line 'humans were not meant to invade' The whole piece is very good.
3/25/2004 c1 7Stolen Nametag
Once again... amazing. I can picture this and lucidly fit myself into every line of this piece of artwork. I've been inspired to write another poem, now...
7Stolen NametagOnce again... amazing. I can picture this and lucidly fit myself into every line of this piece of artwork. I've been inspired to write another poem, now...
3/25/2004 c1 6choirchick123
woah, I almost felt like i was in a dream too, but, when you describe it, put some color into it. was the fractured sky blue or red? purple or green? Details. Good poem! e-mail me sometime and we can discuss it. or . t2yl
6choirchick123woah, I almost felt like i was in a dream too, but, when you describe it, put some color into it. was the fractured sky blue or red? purple or green? Details. Good poem! e-mail me sometime and we can discuss it. or . t2yl
3/24/2004 c1 120Heather Montgomery
Wow. This is a really beautiful poem. I don't know what else to day other than I loved it. It's incredibly sucessful in actually capturing that dreamlike quality. Amazing job!
120Heather MontgomeryWow. This is a really beautiful poem. I don't know what else to day other than I loved it. It's incredibly sucessful in actually capturing that dreamlike quality. Amazing job!
3/23/2004 c1 74LordK
You once told me that you could never express your views on religion, didn't you? Well... apparently you have... Wow. That was extreamly incredible. Great poetry! That was beautiful. All the lines were so incredible. The imagrey (which, if you haven't noticed, is my favorite part of poetry), was some of the most vivid and imaginative and powerful I have ever seen, FP or otherwise. That was pure brilliance. Amazing. The "Waves of the Heavens" line was so... so... deep. Incredible. WOW! Hairline fractures appear on the sky... that's some great poetry, without a doubt. Amazing. One of the best on the site.
74LordKYou once told me that you could never express your views on religion, didn't you? Well... apparently you have... Wow. That was extreamly incredible. Great poetry! That was beautiful. All the lines were so incredible. The imagrey (which, if you haven't noticed, is my favorite part of poetry), was some of the most vivid and imaginative and powerful I have ever seen, FP or otherwise. That was pure brilliance. Amazing. The "Waves of the Heavens" line was so... so... deep. Incredible. WOW! Hairline fractures appear on the sky... that's some great poetry, without a doubt. Amazing. One of the best on the site.