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4/26/2004 c1 8the heart's pawn-shop
Great Job. I feel so much like that all of the time. You really have so good descriptions here. I actually wouldn't mind if it was a bit longer!
-lunelapis
PS you rock! thanks for reviewing my work... I like what you said about a war, but try reading "Response to the Towers" with September 11th in mind!
4/13/2004 c1 12carib-passion
hey this was good stuff. keep it up
4/9/2004 c1 150SpawnMeister666
I like the sentiment of this, but think there is one major flaw.
If you had your own world, there would be no-one to read your writing. Which would make writing pointless.
Or something like that!
Spawny
3/25/2004 c1 11vmclarke8
Hey, KB, did you try putting it in poetry format? Then each line would come out like it's supposed to.. other than that.. it's a great poem.. You submitting it for NCFA?
3/23/2004 c1 EludesTheDay
I love your poem because I can relate to it so much. That kind of freedom is what I look for too. It's nice that the poem gives some fresh words and ideas for that theme.

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