for Give Me My Own World4/26/2004 c1 
8the heart's pawn-shop
Great Job. I feel so much like that all of the time. You really have so good descriptions here. I actually wouldn't mind if it was a bit longer!
-lunelapis
PS you rock! thanks for reviewing my work... I like what you said about a war, but try reading "Response to the Towers" with September 11th in mind!
8the heart's pawn-shopGreat Job. I feel so much like that all of the time. You really have so good descriptions here. I actually wouldn't mind if it was a bit longer!
-lunelapis
PS you rock! thanks for reviewing my work... I like what you said about a war, but try reading "Response to the Towers" with September 11th in mind!
4/9/2004 c1 150SpawnMeister666
I like the sentiment of this, but think there is one major flaw.
If you had your own world, there would be no-one to read your writing. Which would make writing pointless.
Or something like that!
Spawny
150SpawnMeister666I like the sentiment of this, but think there is one major flaw.
If you had your own world, there would be no-one to read your writing. Which would make writing pointless.
Or something like that!
Spawny
3/25/2004 c1 11vmclarke8
Hey, KB, did you try putting it in poetry format? Then each line would come out like it's supposed to.. other than that.. it's a great poem.. You submitting it for NCFA?
11vmclarke8Hey, KB, did you try putting it in poetry format? Then each line would come out like it's supposed to.. other than that.. it's a great poem.. You submitting it for NCFA?
3/23/2004 c1 EludesTheDay
I love your poem because I can relate to it so much. That kind of freedom is what I look for too. It's nice that the poem gives some fresh words and ideas for that theme.
I love your poem because I can relate to it so much. That kind of freedom is what I look for too. It's nice that the poem gives some fresh words and ideas for that theme.