for Actually Existed12/23/2005 c1 lady luck
A drabble is exactly 100 words no more no less. Some are more lax and are 200 words {double drabble} but 99% of drabbles are only 100 words. People just don't know the real definition. This is not a drabble.
A drabble is exactly 100 words no more no less. Some are more lax and are 200 words {double drabble} but 99% of drabbles are only 100 words. People just don't know the real definition. This is not a drabble.
6/30/2004 c1 
11Phaze
Wow, very well put and powerful. I think a lot of people have felt these types of emotions, and even though I found this story with a random search, I am so glad I did. You are a talented young writer who shares her emotions very well. I myself am going through a milder version of what this charecter is facing, so I can relate. Thank you for sharing.
11PhazeWow, very well put and powerful. I think a lot of people have felt these types of emotions, and even though I found this story with a random search, I am so glad I did. You are a talented young writer who shares her emotions very well. I myself am going through a milder version of what this charecter is facing, so I can relate. Thank you for sharing.
4/30/2004 c1 7StarQuality
Wow, that was really powerful :-)
Thank you for reviewing my fic, I'm glad I read yours!
7StarQualityWow, that was really powerful :-)
Thank you for reviewing my fic, I'm glad I read yours!
4/9/2004 c1 rollymc123
Thank you for reviewing my story, and please excuse the delay in returning the favor. I try to be thorough, so bear with me if this review becomes long.
First off, you have an amazing talent with writing the stream of consciousness, meaning a flow of thoughts without interruption. You seem to have mastered this, in fact, and I find it extremely impressive. With this flow comes emotion, and emotion is clearly and amazingly conveyed in this story. You include some happy memories, but they are bitter and overrun by nostalgic thoughts. Wonderful job!
The only thing I'd suggest is adding more commas. Because you are documenting someone's thoughts, it gets a little confusing if you don't have enough commas to give the reader pauses. I think it would help a lot.
Overall, you have incredible talent, so keep writing!
Thank you for reviewing my story, and please excuse the delay in returning the favor. I try to be thorough, so bear with me if this review becomes long.
First off, you have an amazing talent with writing the stream of consciousness, meaning a flow of thoughts without interruption. You seem to have mastered this, in fact, and I find it extremely impressive. With this flow comes emotion, and emotion is clearly and amazingly conveyed in this story. You include some happy memories, but they are bitter and overrun by nostalgic thoughts. Wonderful job!
The only thing I'd suggest is adding more commas. Because you are documenting someone's thoughts, it gets a little confusing if you don't have enough commas to give the reader pauses. I think it would help a lot.
Overall, you have incredible talent, so keep writing!
3/27/2004 c1 12Sapphire-Eyes67
Wow... ^_^ It's amazing that you can write like that, especially something that people can really relate to. You conveyed the emotions so clearly that the reader really understands what you're getting at. Great job!
12Sapphire-Eyes67Wow... ^_^ It's amazing that you can write like that, especially something that people can really relate to. You conveyed the emotions so clearly that the reader really understands what you're getting at. Great job!
3/23/2004 c1 2BLARGH00000009
Oh, God. . . I don't even know how to. . . oh.
If means anything anymore when it comes from me, the emotion you conveyed was perfectly clear and this flowed incredibly.
2BLARGH00000009Oh, God. . . I don't even know how to. . . oh.
If means anything anymore when it comes from me, the emotion you conveyed was perfectly clear and this flowed incredibly.