for Truism?5/17/2004 c1 acccountkiller
Wow! This is fabulous! I love the ideas, the questions...all of them! They are mind-blowing! This is going straight to my favorite's list, your poetry rocks! Love, Mia
Wow! This is fabulous! I love the ideas, the questions...all of them! They are mind-blowing! This is going straight to my favorite's list, your poetry rocks! Love, Mia
4/18/2004 c1 
8Amara Ryden
this is great! i love the structure, and how it questions things we do in life... =)
8Amara Rydenthis is great! i love the structure, and how it questions things we do in life... =)
4/14/2004 c1 SpawnOfLuci
I LOVE YOU! haha, thanks so much for reviewing my poem. I love this one! it's great! I like the scheme and how it all played out... I suck at reviews. JA!
~Echo
I LOVE YOU! haha, thanks so much for reviewing my poem. I love this one! it's great! I like the scheme and how it all played out... I suck at reviews. JA!
~Echo
3/24/2004 c1 17Ruarc
Oh, nifty. This is cool- the formatting rocks. That, and it's just a damn good poem in general. Great job.
17RuarcOh, nifty. This is cool- the formatting rocks. That, and it's just a damn good poem in general. Great job.
3/24/2004 c1 2NessaElensar
hey, this is some really awesome work. the structure def. enhanced what you were trying to get across, especially the "fall". I love stuff that makes me think. :)
2NessaElensarhey, this is some really awesome work. the structure def. enhanced what you were trying to get across, especially the "fall". I love stuff that makes me think. :)
3/24/2004 c1 132Sarah Parker
Meep, Hez... *HUGS* You're so... indepth... and thoughtful... and ponderful, and you always put things into such a new perspective. And I love the fact that you're never afraid to try new things with your writing. But then again, I just love you in general. So it's probably no surprise that I also love this new poem of yours. It's great... I love the contradictions you make, and the questions you pose, and the format... it's all awesome. *HUGS* As you are too.
132Sarah ParkerMeep, Hez... *HUGS* You're so... indepth... and thoughtful... and ponderful, and you always put things into such a new perspective. And I love the fact that you're never afraid to try new things with your writing. But then again, I just love you in general. So it's probably no surprise that I also love this new poem of yours. It's great... I love the contradictions you make, and the questions you pose, and the format... it's all awesome. *HUGS* As you are too.
3/24/2004 c1 29dawningfear
OOh, this is magnificent. I’m loving the clichés and rhetorical questions, and what an excellent title to top it all off! A logician’s nightmare and a poet’s dream. I like the visual touch you added to ‘fall’. Nice, and not overdone. I’m impressed.
Keep on writing, this is really cute.
29dawningfearOOh, this is magnificent. I’m loving the clichés and rhetorical questions, and what an excellent title to top it all off! A logician’s nightmare and a poet’s dream. I like the visual touch you added to ‘fall’. Nice, and not overdone. I’m impressed.
Keep on writing, this is really cute.