
5/24/2004 c4 Kazzi
Go Caroline!
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Wow I never thought I would ever say that. that sounds really weird to my own ears. Especially me saying it lol.
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Bob: Hi!
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Update soon! I need stories to keep me going - GCSE's are HELL!
Go Caroline!
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Wow I never thought I would ever say that. that sounds really weird to my own ears. Especially me saying it lol.
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Bob: Hi!
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Update soon! I need stories to keep me going - GCSE's are HELL!
5/20/2004 c3 eggsbenni221
Wow, this is really interesting. I love the way you make the plot unfold so gradually. it's suspenseful. Keep writing!
Wow, this is really interesting. I love the way you make the plot unfold so gradually. it's suspenseful. Keep writing!
5/20/2004 c3 kazzi
For a girl based on me - wow - she's hot girl! I am not! lol
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But oh my God - The Rasmus that is my favourite song! How did you know!
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Bob: I love you!
For a girl based on me - wow - she's hot girl! I am not! lol
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But oh my God - The Rasmus that is my favourite song! How did you know!
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Bob: I love you!
4/17/2004 c2 Bob n Kazzi
That's fine Blade, you know.
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Bob: A new boyfriend? :O *sobs on Joe's shoulder*
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*pushes Bob off and hugs Joe* Joe!
I play a part in her storee e e e e! lol!
That's fine Blade, you know.
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Bob: A new boyfriend? :O *sobs on Joe's shoulder*
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*pushes Bob off and hugs Joe* Joe!
I play a part in her storee e e e e! lol!
4/15/2004 c2
1Excluded
As good as the first chapter,like I knew it would be.Thanx for sending that
review I'm really grateful though that
lie about that being the best prologue
got me,but thanx for trying.Keep going!

As good as the first chapter,like I knew it would be.Thanx for sending that
review I'm really grateful though that
lie about that being the best prologue
got me,but thanx for trying.Keep going!
4/10/2004 c2
17Bob n Kazzi
Hey! She has the same name as someone you and I know extremely well!
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lol, I am liking this sotyr! How come you haven't emailed me in ages though dear? I'm most upset!
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Please have a look at my updated story Transition! I love you guys!
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Bob: *smoochies*
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Love to Joe!

Hey! She has the same name as someone you and I know extremely well!
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lol, I am liking this sotyr! How come you haven't emailed me in ages though dear? I'm most upset!
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Please have a look at my updated story Transition! I love you guys!
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Bob: *smoochies*
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Love to Joe!
4/9/2004 c2
196Damaged
M .. wow ... now I'm VERY interested in this story .. excellent chapter .. update soon!

M .. wow ... now I'm VERY interested in this story .. excellent chapter .. update soon!
4/2/2004 c1
24Dark Lalage
this is really good and u should keep writing! it's graphic but thats how i like stories so keep writing your a really good author!

this is really good and u should keep writing! it's graphic but thats how i like stories so keep writing your a really good author!
3/25/2004 c1
1Excluded
Oh my god!Just this one short chapter moved me,it made me want to cry.Just
imagining the child brung a lump to my
throat.I hope this review will encourage
you to go on,because I loved these few
paragraphs.

Oh my god!Just this one short chapter moved me,it made me want to cry.Just
imagining the child brung a lump to my
throat.I hope this review will encourage
you to go on,because I loved these few
paragraphs.
3/25/2004 c1 Bob n Kazzi
Wow. I think this could be good.
Wow. I think this could be good.
3/25/2004 c1 evilcleo
very interesting
very interesting