for Secrets of the Sun3/31/2004 c1 
12decided
Very nice. Quite insightful from ones perspective. The comparison between night and day and the contrasts of the story bring a subtle concoction of drama and the quiet beauty of human relationships. Well done.
12decidedVery nice. Quite insightful from ones perspective. The comparison between night and day and the contrasts of the story bring a subtle concoction of drama and the quiet beauty of human relationships. Well done.
3/30/2004 c1 15twilight1915
Incredible writing- your use of language and your insites on human life is astounding. This truely is a truth.
Keep up the good work!
XOXO Sam
15twilight1915Incredible writing- your use of language and your insites on human life is astounding. This truely is a truth.
Keep up the good work!
XOXO Sam
3/27/2004 c1 16grim'alkin
i can relate to the night, to Luna. [hahah! appropriate names-luna, the name of our moon!]
and solis, i think from Sol, the name of our sun. very nice!
And, about the message:
i couldn't agree with you more, that Luna loves her sadness and, by loving it, makes her identify herself more.
but, i think it was a great observation that Solis was suffering more. great analogy on the sun and Solis' situation.
-yeah, it is dedicated to ate Cel.
16grim'alkini can relate to the night, to Luna. [hahah! appropriate names-luna, the name of our moon!]
and solis, i think from Sol, the name of our sun. very nice!
And, about the message:
i couldn't agree with you more, that Luna loves her sadness and, by loving it, makes her identify herself more.
but, i think it was a great observation that Solis was suffering more. great analogy on the sun and Solis' situation.
-yeah, it is dedicated to ate Cel.
3/25/2004 c1 4shadowdreamer7598
Wow! That's so good...I loved the words you used and the way you write, and psychologically, that's really deep. I never would have thought of night and day like that, and I love the way you told your story in the form of people. Keep writing, I love it!
4shadowdreamer7598Wow! That's so good...I loved the words you used and the way you write, and psychologically, that's really deep. I never would have thought of night and day like that, and I love the way you told your story in the form of people. Keep writing, I love it!