for Sacrifice4/9/2004 c1 
13LeahBird
beautiful...thats the best way to describe this. I really like the last three lines. The word choice is perfect. The one thing that i might change is switch Ringing to Singing because it seems to fit better with the singing of the angels of death.
Really, it was wonderful
13LeahBirdbeautiful...thats the best way to describe this. I really like the last three lines. The word choice is perfect. The one thing that i might change is switch Ringing to Singing because it seems to fit better with the singing of the angels of death.
Really, it was wonderful
4/7/2004 c1 inactiveaccountz
Eh! Very beautiful, I loved it! These kind of poems have always been my favorite...you know, the well written ones! ^_^
Eh! Very beautiful, I loved it! These kind of poems have always been my favorite...you know, the well written ones! ^_^
3/27/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
-smile- not such a bad poem, interesting how there's not any stanzas and such. Good vocabulary and descriptions. I also want to thank you for giving me a review! =)
Jenna xx
119AntiPleasure-smile- not such a bad poem, interesting how there's not any stanzas and such. Good vocabulary and descriptions. I also want to thank you for giving me a review! =)
Jenna xx